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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:23 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:26 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:41 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:04 pm
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Sanzoskitsune Argentice Sanzoskitsune I think I'm making it work... it takes a lot of work to make it flow and not seem forced. I just hate crossover where its clear they were forced together, where it makes no sense why they got together that really irks me And yet, you're writing one. you know... if you don't like it then don't read it, I worked hard on finding a way to make the crossover make sense
I was joking!
The only thing that gets me is the u-turn the Sanzo party took. I mean, it makes sense, I just can't help of thinking of the train ride each time. |
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:08 pm
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Argentice Sanzoskitsune Argentice Sanzoskitsune I think I'm making it work... it takes a lot of work to make it flow and not seem forced. I just hate crossover where its clear they were forced together, where it makes no sense why they got together that really irks me And yet, you're writing one. you know... if you don't like it then don't read it, I worked hard on finding a way to make the crossover make sense I was joking! The only thing that gets me is the u-turn the Sanzo party took. I mean, it makes sense, I just can't help of thinking of the train ride each time.
It was a bad joke, I feel very self conscious about my writing and while I can take constructive criticism stuff like that makes me wince |
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:13 pm
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Sanzoskitsune Argentice Sanzoskitsune Argentice Sanzoskitsune I think I'm making it work... it takes a lot of work to make it flow and not seem forced. I just hate crossover where its clear they were forced together, where it makes no sense why they got together that really irks me And yet, you're writing one. you know... if you don't like it then don't read it, I worked hard on finding a way to make the crossover make sense I was joking! The only thing that gets me is the u-turn the Sanzo party took. I mean, it makes sense, I just can't help of thinking of the train ride each time. It was a bad joke, I feel very self conscious about my writing and while I can take constructive criticism stuff like that makes me wince
*hugs* You're still better than most the fanfic I see.
Sorry that didn't come out right. |
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:28 pm
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Argentice Sanzoskitsune meh s'ok I guess, I know I'm not that great If you didn't at least have the mind for it, I wouldn't be asking for your help, now would I? wink Oh, after I get this chapter written up, could you beta-read for me?
Yeah sure |
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:58 pm
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Sanzoskitsune Argentice Sanzoskitsune meh s'ok I guess, I know I'm not that great If you didn't at least have the mind for it, I wouldn't be asking for your help, now would I? wink Oh, after I get this chapter written up, could you beta-read for me? Yeah sure
Right on. Expect an email by the end of the night. smile |
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:59 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:13 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:15 pm
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