mint sunshine
i'm holding a mini avi arena with my avi to see if people like it before i enter in the arena.
Hidden MaliceThey all thought that she was weak and pathetic. The teased her and laughed at her and talked behind her back. She was always kind and loving, even when they slighted her. What they didn't know was that she was a powerful enchantress capable of summoning fantastic beasts and dangerous monters. But one day, she snapped...
I like the avi...Let me help you with the description.
It's all good untill "What they didn't know was that she was a powerful enchantress capable of summoning fantastic beasts and dangerous monters. But one day, she snapped"
I would make it "little did they know, she was a powerful enchantress capable ot summoning dangerous and powerfull monsters. Soon enough, she couldn't take it anymore and those bullies were never seen again.
