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 Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:37 am
Hey I was wondering what you thought about these.
LOSERS
WE ARE THE MANY!
WE ARE THE PROUD!
WE ARE DIFFERENT!
I LAUGH WHEN I HURT.
I SCREAM WHEN I’M BORED.
I BELIEVE IN THE UNBELIEVABLE.
THIS IS ME.
I AM A LOSER
ONE OF MANY
AND I THINK WE ALL ARE LOSERS
EVEN IF SOMETIMES YOU DON’T WANT TO ADMIT IT.
YOU ALL SUCK AT SOMETHING SO
YOU’RE NOT PERFECT AND I LIKE THAT.
IT MAKES LIFE FUN.
SO WHEN YOU FEEL LIKE A LOSER JUST SMILE.
YOU’RE NOT ALONE.
YOU’RE JUST ONE IN A MILLION.
- KIMMI
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:38 am
Thoughts
You tell me I’m a freak.
You say I’m just a creep.
I tell you to be unique,
And that you’re just a bleep!
Why do you care so much about what I do?
Especially, since it has absolutely nothing to do with you.
So now I’m left to argue.
You only like a select few and they only matter from your point of view.
The rest of us you just judge because we don’t do what you want us too.
Because being different is new to you.
You go around making labels,
And you just love to start these battles.
You’re just another drone following others.
All are a bunch of phony actors.
And I’m proud to be a weirdo/creep.
To bad you’ll always be a bleep.
By: Kimmi
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:12 pm
first one very good i like
secon one lol also good funny
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:19 am
Thanks for checking them out
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 1:28 pm
the 1st one was aswesome, the 2nd was awesome too!
they're both so cool ^^v
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 10:39 am
Both are very good,
I like the first one the best, it is very true and it makes me smile biggrin
Keep writing, your pretty good 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 9:29 am
Both of your poems are good. The first is your best, but I agree that the second is funny! biggrin You should definitely keep writing, You have the talent, you only need to fine tune it! Great Job! mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:37 pm
i like them they are very good
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:00 pm
i loved the first one and the second one was also good. keep on being awesome
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:17 pm
the second one was good. keep going lady mrgreen *thumbs up*
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