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Kenutsu Yasashiku

PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:32 pm


My Profile Page

This is a link to my profile page wich has links to pages in my journal where I posted 52 chapters of something I wrote. It was a few years ago and cercumstances caused me to stop writing it.

One of the things I want to do with it is to go back and make the chapters longer, perhaps by combining a few of them. In word they were only 1-1.5 pages long on average and I felt that was too short.

Due to circumstances with how much free time I have, I have instead started a new story. This is because I cannot get onto my computer as often as I would like, and I have a new iPhone so I have been writing on there. Progress is slow, but I will probably soon start posting chapters on gaia for that story. So far that one is only a prologue and I have started the 1st chapter. Chapters will take months to complete however, so I appologise to anyone who likes either story. The first one because it is making no progress currently, and the second because the progress is slow.

Here is the title and summary for the 52 chapter story. I am not so good with summaries, and technically this is my first one. So please let me know how I did on it.

Cronicles of Aura: Cat and Mouse, In the Pursuit of Evil: Follow the story of seemingly unrelated individuals as they become inexplicably bound together by fate. There is the charming and mysterious young traveler trying to figure out why destruction fallows in his wake, and whom is just beginning to understand that he is his own worst nightmare. Fallow the legendardy Kenutsu Yasashiku as he takes up persuit of the traveler and tries to stop him before more people suffer.

Well, I hope you like what you read, and please comment on them. The comments help me make the story better, and if they are good comments they give me the confidence I need to continue writing.

~Kenutsu.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:01 pm


I have now posted a summary for one of my works. As stated above it was never finished, and the summary is my first. In fact the work itself was my first serious writing.

Thank you everyone.

Kenutsu Yasashiku


Lyvidian

PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:03 pm


"fallow" should be "follow"
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:09 pm


Lyvidian
"fallow" should be "follow"
Thank you. whee

Kenutsu Yasashiku


Lyvidian

PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:17 pm


No prob. Also, your profile link is busted... in the sense that it leads the clicker to their own profile.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:24 pm


Thank you again. That is a silly error to have, and a difficult one to see without help too.

Kenutsu Yasashiku

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