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so yeah this is a character for my new rp idea i have posted in the story concept thread, and it just feels like.......something is missing.....or just isnt right.
(link to the thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20137547)

Username: drag0ntamer
Character name: Fuuka mitsuki
Age: 16
Personality: After what she went through Fuuka tends to be hard to get to know because she is still slightly traumatized by her very own community and doesn't want to have to get close to someone and have the painful moment of having to leave her loved ones again. but in all reality she is a very outgoing and energetic person who is not afraid to say what is on her mind. She also has a fiery temper in which you don't want to be the person on the receiving end because that person will most likely get singed or even burned. She is also very athletic. as guys.
Grade: 11th grade
History: In her old school she had to be careful to hide her powers but her temper made that rather difficult at times. When she was at her old school she was on pretty much every athletic team imaginable, basketball, soccer, tennis, the school had the sport she was in it. On top of that she also happened to be one of the smarted and one of the most popular girls (among both boys and girls) throughout the entire school. That all came to a screeching halt when she overheard a conversation some of her classmates were having. They said the most taboo line they could ever say around this girl "Heh women they should know their place is in the kitchen." With those words her powers exploded violently along with her anger. Luckily she was able to control herself leaving the boys to be scared out of their minds.

After that the shunning began, she was immediately expelled from the school on claims that she was an endangerment to the entire student body. The school even went as far as putting a restraining order preventing her from being within 5 miles of the school. Sadly her home was within those 5 miles and her family didn't want to move. So they packed her things into a few brief cases shoved her out the door and slammed the door in her face. Not soon after the incident the news of her 'difference' spread like wildfire throughout the city and she soon find that restruants and hotels denied her access. After many weeks of walking around trying to find a place to stay she one day bumped into a strange man who of course knew about her powers. But the man was soon telling her of a school that would shelter her and other like her and teach them how to use their powers. By this time she was starting to get desperate to find a safe place to sleep and was soon off in the direction the man had told her to go, and not too long later she arrived at the school, and her new home.
Power: fire
Strengths: sports, homework, studying, kendo
Weaknesses: water deathly afraid of it
Appearance: Fuuka
Extra: At time she seems to appear anti-social.

ok thx for the info and also this just so happens to be my 3rd ever female rp character sweatdrop so yeah i need some work on it lol

ok so first off sorry for the really late reply my schedule has been rather busy lately. sweatdrop so anyways on to the clarification oh and complete overhaul of the details of this character 3nodding

for the first thing you have said about her personality i will be rewriting the whole thing to make it actually make sense sweatdrop as for what i put down under extras i hear you and will be moving it up to personality.

as for all the questions you have asked they are very helpful and shall all be answered once i get to rewriting the history and such

You can take afew things from an rp i was in atleast the name of the school and one of my characters could easilly be the strange man that finds her.
anything i can do to help character development along..