Does this seem reasonable, does anything not really make sense? She feels a little flat to me.
Name: Xanthia
Nickname: Xani (Refuses to be addressed with Xanthia)
Race: Human-Succubus
Nationality: Greek
Height: 6'
Hair color: Silver
Eye color: Silver
Skin tone: Dark-skinned
Xanthia is a badly mannered woman with total disregard for the social social standards and norm. She is extroverted for the most part and often a little
too loud. She tends to irritate people a great deal, but shrugs it off as something that isn't her problem.
She doesn't stick around for talks that involve love, friendship or anything of the sort. Most people assume it's just an immaturity that she never grew out of – she doesn't even know why, herself. All she knows is that she hates anything to do with compassion. The reality behind this is a father figure never being present, her mother never being home and her husband leaving her shortly after their marital ceremony.
When Xanthia says she'll get a job done, she will definitely get it done. This isn't to say she'll get it done in the requested way, and quite often she ends up making more of a mess than there was to begin with. She isn't entirely to be trusted. She'll do what it takes to get the job done.
She's not very good at dealing with anger. She tends to go quite quiet and withdraw, brooding until she finally snaps. She doesn't always snap after excessive pestering. Sometimes, she can just be left alone for hours before finally snapping. Although Xanthia gets sad, she doesn't often recognise the emotion as sadness and generally just gets angry about things instead. She tends to claim she doesn't get sad, a fair bit.
She's very judgemental and sticks with her first instincts. Once her mind is set, and it's usually set before someone can even introduce themselves, it takes a miracle to budge it. She becomes less a**l after being around people for a long while, but doesn't really notice this change in herself. On the subject of change, she flips at the slightest change out of her control, but loves to be spontaneous. This tends to make other people on edge, which she loves. She can never get enough of winding people up.
Xanthia never had a father figure throughout life, and her mother was often out working (what she assumed to be) the streets. She doesn't remember much about her – it was well over four hundred years ago – but she
can remember her mother saying 'Don't follow in my footsteps, Xanthia' – words she came to loathe. One night, when she was in her early teens, some people broke into the house and took her mother. She worried about her mother for years, doing everything she could to find her – even a body, but nothing came unearthed. When she was in her early twenties, she was approached by a mysterious man telling her that he could find out if her mother was dead or not. She accepted the deal, only he turned out to be the devil. She sold her soul to find out anything – even that her mother was dead, she just wanted some closure. He told her that she wasn't dead and took her to hell where she stood beneath a gargantuan statue of someone who looked suspiciously like her mother. That's when she learned that her mother had just left her. She ditched the name Xanthia and insisted that she be called Xani, instead – wanting nothing more to do with her mother. She came to resent the woman for leaving her.
While in hell, she met an incubus named Kanuha. The two shared a little bond and decided to form a union – a little unusual for those of their race – but neither were particularly usual. Xanthia never forgave him for leaving her for a life, free of being tied down. She can't even see him without anger bubbling. He, himself, and his existence is one of the few things that can make her snap automatically.
To distract herself, Xanthia focused in being a better succubus – trying to get more points in the system in order to get a better ranking so that she might one day meet her mother – one of the best out there. When she one day, finally reached the rank below her mother's general rank, she was told by the devil that had had a task for her and if she could complete it, then he'd raise her rank instantly, to the highest. She accepted before even hearing what it was, but it was too late to back out. The task involved working with an underling succubus to try and catch Kanuha, who had seemed to have lost his mind, and kill him. She's been trying ever since for the past year or so.
The closest she and her underling helper, Tatsunoko (who sold her soul for a tattoo in a horrible accident), got to killing Kanuha, was firing a harpoon at him, that accidentally hit a young Polish girl, Celestynka. Tatsu and Xani tricked her into becoming a Succubus so that they would look better, instead of getting into trouble for murdering an innocent girl.
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