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PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:55 am


{Insert Title}
Title-The Teslers? Sibling Rivalry?

Characters

Protagonist(s)

The Tesler Siblings
May and Trenton are full blooded siblings and Samuel is their half-brother

Antagonist(s)

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Name: Samuel Tesler
Nickname or Short: Sam
Out Of The Three Im The: Oldest
Age: 26
Date of Birth: August 21,
Sex: Male
Personality:
Likes:
Dislike:
Talents:
Facts:
The Song They Play When I Walk:
Other:
Bio:
Pic:

Written Description:
Tall slim 5"9'. Weight 173. Slim athletic build. Medium brown hair that is well kept and short with green eyes. No contacts or glasses. Semi-tan skin. (Casual) Wears dark colored button shirt with dark jeans and clean black sneakers.


Name: May Tesler
Nickname or Short: May-may
Out Of The Three I’m The: Middle
Age: 24
Date of Birth: April 9,
Sex: Female
Personality: Haughty, overmodest, daring, presumptuous, open-hearted, independent, dauntless, and grave. More prone to action then talking about it. Eager for success, and willing to work for it. Intense worker. Hides behind a mask when in it comes to emotions and feelings.
Likes: Is multi-fascinated when things aren’t serious. Music, having things to do, Theology,
Dislike: stress(even though she does a decent job under stress), nagging, angered people, annoyance, "outrageous and false" accusations. Overall she usually ignores these to a point.
Talents: Gymnastics (Flexibility), Martial arts, hard worker.
Facts: She doesn't like to be disturbed when she is busy or messed with.
The Song They Play When I Walk:
Other:
Bio:
Pic:

Written Description: Tall exact Height 5"6'. Weighs a slim athletic build. Total weight 142 pounds. Light brown/dark blonde hair that medium length, with green eyes no glasses or contacts. Skin semi-tan. (Casual) Usually wears a one colored tight tank top or shirt with a jacket. Usually cloth hoodie or leather jacket. Wears jeans (dark). Her feet are covered with regular converse shoes or other type. Sometime wears sunglasses and never wears a purse.(She hates purses) She is a clean person. Her hair is draped over her shoulders a bit as its straight and brushed. (Business) For business she wear black pants and jacket. White shirt is tucked in. As in this Picture



Name: Trenton Tesler
Nickname or Short: Trent
Out Of The Three Im The: Youngest
Age: 23
Date of Birth: July 17,
Sex: Male
Personality:
Likes:
Dislike:
Talents:
Facts:
The Song They Play When I Walk: In One Ear - Cage The Elephant
Other:
Bio:
Pic:

Written Description: Medium height, 5"7' to be exact. Weight slightly heavy, plus big boned. Weight to be exact is 184 pounds. His eyes are blue no glasses or contacts. With dark brown hair. He is somewhat stocky and an athletic build. Usually wears a single colored shirt, primarily red or black. Wears clean blue jeans and on his feet are either nice vans or basketball shoes. Hair is slightly kept, usually side swept (Casual) Lightly tan almost pale


Internal conflict(s)

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External conflict(s)

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Overall Book

Book type - Science fiction

Theme song - Not Afraid-Eminem (possibly will change)

Setting/Other

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Where- Present day America

who- The siblings

when-

why-

how-

Main Idea/summary

~Three siblings come together after years of being separated.(Or something along that lines of sappy maybe) go into a business (Something to do with spies or special service, fbi, cia, something of the like) antagonist does (greedy, power, something, etc.)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:27 pm


wow this looks really good. I really hope you post whatever you write here, or at least a way for us in the guild to read it.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:07 pm


Thanks Im working on the characters and their internal conflicts before I make my final descision on the external conflict(s) and plot and the like. Plus its only under construction so far so nothing here is stable and complete yet.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:29 pm


Plus I think its A nice start to help me clear my thoughts and put them intoi order. Im not going to right the whole story here(so far that im thinking), but so far I want people tell me what you think of the plot when I have it all out on here.

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