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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:47 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:21 pm
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While the name Jimothy Tedword makes me literally cringe, it's your cult I'm the most interested in. First of all, what does the cult worship? You said the spirit just hangs around, so I assume they don't worship it. So what makes them a cult? I guess that's where you have to start. To decide whether to make them good or evil, I'd flip a coin. And please don't tell me they refer to themselves as a cult, because cults, traditionally, are delusional about their cultishness, and don't call themselves cults. I'm also curious as to what makes this cult look appealing to him? He's looking for excitement, so what's so great about this?
Cults usually have very strict rules and laws, and often are very exclusive. I can't imagine they'd advertise by flier. I would believe that they would send out representatives to recruit members in person, so they could filter through who they believe is susceptible to their influence. I don't buy that they just let anybody in, especially newbies into their inner circles. Wouldn't Jimothy (that name makes me want to gag) have to work his way up in the ranks before he's trusted enough to be brought in?
I'll leave it off there. I've got plenty of more details I'm curious about, but I think you need to sort through what the cult is, what they worship, what they represent, and what makes them so appealing first. Then I'd get into their social structure. How their leadership works, and everything down from there.
Okay. Go!
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 6:54 pm
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