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 Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:26 am
Do you want to learn how to write a good book, then join this RP!
There are four stages to this school.
Grade 1 - write a decent letter to a pen friend
Grade 2 - write an essay
Grade 3 - write a poem
Grade 4 - write a book!
Call me Will when adressing me or sir. So what are you waiting for, come on and join the class! mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:55 pm
Good Morning! *begins to write* Dear Rachel,---How are you doing? I just finished my Geometry Honors test. I hope I did good. How has school been for you? I personally don't like school. The kids here in Florida are like "Demons" you know? ---Speaking of Florida, when are you coming back down here again? I would love to see you. I miss your corkiness. Haha. I really do miss you though. ---What happened to Jason? I heard about the crash. Is he okay? No one has told me anything else, and I figured that you may be able to tell me whats up. Please tell me. I hope hes okay. Your Bestest BuddEric
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 3:55 am
Wow, awesome! Will, you opened a school! I will participate as well.
Okay, here is level 1: the letter.
Terry Bogard
Empress Dee's Lounge
Barton Town, Gaia Commercial district
Renaissance Galaxy
William-Tyler
The Romantic Piano
Barton Town, Commercial district
Renaissance Galaxy
Friday, November 3rd, 3030.
Dear Will,
Hey there! Oh my stars, you have opened your own school! so, how do you enjoy working here in the commercial district? For me, I find it tiring.
Anyways, William, I gotta go to bed. I'm tired. *yawns* Good night.
Love Always,
Terry
How'd I do?
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:36 am
Jarynn Good Morning! *begins to write* Dear Rachel,---How are you doing? I just finished my Geometry Honors test. I hope I did well. How has school been for you? I personally don't like school. The kids here in Florida are like "Demons" you know? ---Speaking of Florida, when are you coming back down here again? I would love to see you. I miss your corkiness. Haha. I really do miss you though. ---What happened to Jason? I heard about the crash. Is he okay? No one has told me anything else, and I figured that you may be able to tell me whats up. Please tell me. I hope hes okay. Your Bestest BuddEric I give you, Eric a 9/10 for the letter level, you pass. 90% is your grade for letter level. Eric write an essay now on the topic of your choice. May I suggest something on plane crashes? That's just me, but its up to you.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:39 am
Terrance_Nicolas_Bogard Wow, awesome! Will, you opened a school! I will participate as well. Okay, here is level 1: the letter. Terry Bogard Empress Dee's Lounge Barton Town, Gaia Commercial district Renaissance Galaxy William-Tyler The Romantic Piano Barton Town, Commercial district Renaissance Galaxy Friday, November 3rd, 3030. Dear Will, Hey there! Oh my stars, you have opened your own school! So, how do you enjoy working here in the commercial district? For me, I find it tiring. Anyways, William, I gotta go to bed. I'm tired. *yawns* Good night. Love Always, Terry How'd I do? Terry, you also got a 9/10. So, that gives you a 90%, good job! Now for level 2, Terry, you must write an essay of your choice. May I suggest writing something about businesses? It's only a suggestion and completely up to you in what you choose.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:42 am
Students thus far enrolled and their grades
Eric:
Level 1 - 90%
Level 2 -
Level 3 -
Level 4-
overall grade -
Terry:
Level 1 - 90%
Level 2 - 30%
Level 3 -
Level 4 -
overall grade -
Neoarcadian:
Level 1 - 70%
Level 2 -
Level 3 -
Level 4 -
overall grade -
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 9:44 am
neoarcadian *write's a book in class for a very very long time* hmm... This is spam, neo. Write the level one and show me what you wrote or leave please, thank you.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:10 pm
Hold on, I cannot right now.. just give me a bit...
i will edit this later sorry *leaves*
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:52 pm
Hmm...an essay as level 2...businesses is your suggestion...okay..lets see...
Title of topic:Should businesses keep raising prices even if the supply and demand is high?
I believe that no matter how busy or not busy a place is, there should be no increase or decrease in prices.
When a business starts out, say a brand new bus company in a brand new city, the prices are generally low. This is because it attracts people to use that system. The same goes for fast food joints or restaurants. In the 1950's, the cost of a cup of coffee was only a nickel. Five cents was all it cost! But nowadays, a cup of coffee is close to a dollar. That was a mistake. Imagine how many more people would be attracted to or wanting to buy a cup of coffee if the price was still a nickel when lets say the cost of housing is like mega high! That cup of coffee would be awfully nice in a highly inflated world.
The downside might be that the economy would just level out and there would be no change and things might get boring. Well, if it an emotional thing, then what a sorry bunch of people we have become.
I would rather have an economy when prices, no matter how much the want it has or how little people want that item, are leveled and nothing goes up than a society where when there is a big demand for something the prices raise sky high. Why do you think people complain when taxes go up? They complain because taxes are no longer leveled. It is like a big demand for tax!
Well, if we do not want that big demand in tax because we fear taxes are going to be higher, then why not lower the costs of things, lower the tax rate naturally and keep it that way. Then we will have, I believe a better business society.
Essay done by Terry Bogard. Saturday, November the 4th, 3030.
Grade me William, please? I have completed level 2.
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 7:07 pm
Here is my letter:
Dear Crystal,
I am so sorry that I cannot meet you at this point of time because I have met some of my friend while traveling east, so please be patient. How is Luceed doing? Did she change? I hope she isn't too bashful anymore.... Oh and can you please leave a note to Val and Mamoru to meet me in the central district? I kinda have some issues with his friends that came to me.. oh and don't forget to take a look for my pets. I'm sorry I cannot see you today, but possibly on Monday night, take care and God bless!
Love,
Neoarcadian
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 10:54 am
Terrance_Nicolas_Bogard Hmm...an essay as level 2...businesses is your suggestion...okay..lets see... Title of topic:Should businesses keep raising prices even if the supply and demand is high? I believe that no matter how busy or not busy a place is, there should be no increase or decrease in prices. When a business starts out, say a brand new bus company in a brand new city, the prices are generally low. This is because it attracts people to use that system. The same goes for fast food joints or restaurants. In the 1950's, the cost of a cup of coffee was only a nickel. Five cents was all it cost! But nowadays, a cup of coffee is close to a dollar. That was a mistake. Imagine how many more people would be attracted to or wanting to buy a cup of coffee if the price was still a nickel! That cup of coffee would be awfully nice, wouldn't it? The downside might be that the economy would just level out and there would be no change and things might get boring. Well, if it is an emotional thing, then what a sorry bunch of people we have become! I would rather have an economy when prices, no matter what the demand rate is, are the same and nothing goes up than live in a society like we do today! All in all, I believe that businesses should not raise prices. Essay done by Terry Bogard. Saturday, November the 4th, 3030.Grade me William, please? I have completed level 2. Okay, Terry...you failed this one. 3/10. For advice: Try and make your sentences simpler and to the point. When writing an essay, adding the word "you" asks for a question upon question. That isn't good. You want to make your audience believe that what you say is right or should be. And when you are emphasizing something, then use one of these... "!" It will help you. So, it wasn't your best work Terry.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 11:10 am
neoarcadian Here is my letter: Dear Crystal, I am so sorry that I cannot meet you at this point of time because I have met some of my friends while traveling east, so please be patient. How is Luceed doing? Did she change? I hope she isn't too bashful anymore. Oh... could you please leave a note to Val and Mamoru to meet me in the central district? I kinda have some issues with his friends that came to me. Don't forget to take a look for my pets, they went missing. I'm sorry that I cannot see you today, but possibly on Monday night? Please take great care and God bless! Love, Neoarcadian Okay well, not too bad. I am giving you a 70% on this. There was a plural mistake as your first one. When saying the word "some of" then it is a plural thing. So when you put "friend" instead of "friends" it was a plural mistake. Your second mistake was "can you please leave a note for..." Is this person unable to write a note or am I right in thinking that you meant "could you please leave a note for..." as in a reminder to do something. Your third error was that there was more than one topic in this so, you needed to make paragraphs. I fixed it up into a better way to write the same letter. Oh and welcome to the Honshura Academy. You can now write level 2 of the program. Write an essay of your choice on one of the topics in your letter. A suggestion: Should friends abandon friends? You do not have to take this suggestion, it was only a suggestion.
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:00 am
Dear Everyone,
My name is Tezumak99 and i go to 11th grade. Is there anything else that you need to know?
Your New Student/Friend
Tezumak99
should i put my reall name?
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 9:55 am
No signature on this letter...incomplete.
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