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 Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:04 am
ello well please comment and tell me if you like it? ok well if not then you make me cry... anyway please read at least? thanks ok then
memory or dream
Memory or dream
Were you really there?
A figure in the mists of my memory
Or a dream
Of pain and love
A dream I’ll wake from
In a cold dark morning
Where you won’t be there
To say I love you
Reality is harsh
Wounds bleed and souls flee
The ravages of our conscience
A mysterious dream
Of you and me
In worlds unseen
And adventures not yet adventured
But all I see is you and me
Your quiet eyes and voice
Calming my racing heart
I blink
You’re gone
Far away from where I am
And I’ll never get you back
Somewhere you’re not coming back
Memory or dream?
To me it’s all the same
I dream of you when I’m awake
And memories haunt my dreams
Whether memory or dream
I think of you
And only you
I close my eyes and ask again
Memory or dream?
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:18 pm
awww! ^___^ i really like this piece! very emotional and great use of words
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:59 pm
Aww, that's just so...my style. I love poetry that isn't all gushy and sappy giggly happy. Absolutely beautiful. I can soooo see this written on old looking paper, maybe burned around the edges, in caligraphy or French script. Beautiful.
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:33 am
I LOVE your poem,it´s awsome...that´s excactly how I feel after losing someone I loved.If every poem you write is this good you could consider publishing...
I send you my love,Soulfire29
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:00 pm
Very good, i like your writing style 3nodding
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