Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Sentama Lin]

You sport the courtier aesthetic well, La Belle. It's either courtier or showgirl; I couldn't make up my mind. Only friendly suggestion I have is get a mouth of some sort and perhaps get a little-less-paled tone of skin.  

[CR Kyrie]

My only complaint is the shoes... and that for a simple reason. They were one of the first items I had on this avatar Oo; so I've got this weird setup in my mind that says they're cheap.

They're not really, but that's how I've come to see them.  

[Large Inmate]

The vest and possibly the jacket go horrible with the gold and them the green.  

[Erverain]

It's way too cluttered...  

[xPunkface]

Cowboy! =P  

[x_S H i K i G a M i_x]

just change the hairstyle...it doesn't really match...other than that, its awesome!  

[Arcanas]

Lose the vampire skin. That is all.  

[Sentama Lin]

It's such a lame excuse, but the simplicity bothers me. I understand the purpose of the attire, of course, but I wish it had something more. Unfortunately, Gaia's item selection doesn't have anything I could think that would work with this situation.  

[Trish the Stalker]

I think if anything... the cig kind of... well it's a cig. But it still looks good so I dunno.

(Mine's so lame it totally deserves to get slammed)  

[PahnGreen]

Stop it.  

[Trish the Stalker]

PahnGreen

Stop it.

It's supposed to be critiqued, love, and I don't pretend for a second that it's an awesome avatar. I just like being bandaged, lol.  

[CR Kyrie]

I do actually like the avatar.

But if I had to critique it, I'd have to say that there are clothing items that would better match the idea of 'feeling crappy' that you're going for.

That's all ;D  

[Erverain]

The hat's a bit... wrong and you might pull it off better with a rapier.
Heck, so would I, but I don't have nearly enough cash...  

[Sentama Lin]

Save for the egg, the ensemble ties well together, Erv. :3  

[Erverain]

You leave Shelley out of this.
The guitar doesn't seem to go with the rest of the outfit.