Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Taeryyn]

It needs direction. At the moment, all you have is a base. No colour scheme, no discernible story...

It's a good start, but it's really not...critique-able yet. 3nodding  

[CR Kyrie]

x-Dark-Pisces-x

Reminds me of something out of either a bizarre horror film, an LSD trip, or a Salvador Dali painting. I like it a lot, but it's missing something. It needs more. Good work so far though.

I was thinking Silent Hill myself, but I like all three of those! lol

Uh, let's see heeeere....

I like your use of the demonic items and the classic red/black scheme, but it gets confusing at the torso. The large amount of items there, compared to the relative quiet of the rest of the avatar, looks a bit cluttered.  

[Erverain]

Are those just a bunch of monthlies? You couldn't come up with a creative amalgam of parts with only one or two, so you dress up in a set?  

[CR Kyrie]

Plus pants, belt, and suspenders, actually. But yes, I always dress up with the monthlies as the focus on the fifteenth, then move back to my normal dress on the sixteenth.

As for yours, the dark blue steals my focus.  

[Saverio C.]

The character looks like a hardened fighter, so the rose is out of place. Also the scar and the black eye thing don't need to be together. Just one would be better  

[CR Kyrie]

True. The rose was just a coloring thing, since I thought it might need more red, and the 'black eye' is actually a curse =] part of a continuing roleplay. But yes, I agree. I'll probably take the scar off later.

Uh... I'd have to say that the only problem I have with your avatar is the hair. It's a bit boring, compared to the relative extravagance of the rest of your avatar? Other than that, I do really like it.  

[Elcia]

I agree with the scar removal. I'd also like to see the band of the hat have red and/or gold but you can't do that. So I'll just suggest you rummage through Tektek and see how gold pins look as hat pins. You might find one that you like to throw some color up there.
Other than that it's fine.  

[Erverain]

Well, if I have to say any one thing, it's that you reek of necromancy. Having no eyes is really creepy. Nice work.  

[invisible-weirdo]

It's a good science-y one, though I think the pantacorax and dandiidodad are a bit unnecessary. The elf-tech kinda is too, but he's sorta like your assistant, so he's fine.  

[Taeryyn]

I like it, but it is a bit top-heavy. The colours all work, though. (I tend to disregard Lemmy, though. x3 It's just a given that he's there.)  

[124-C]

The blue wings kind of stand out for me. I'm not sure why, but I find them rather distracting...  

[Sanzoskitsune]

I like the robotic pirate look you've got going on... doggy does seem to come a little out of nowhere though, other than that very nice!  

[Erverain]

There's a few too many tails for that to work right, Sanzo. Otherwise, it's nice.  

[Sentama Lin]

As appropriate as it is in this case, I wish you had a mouth. It's really the only thing I could find irking about the avatar.

As for mine... there's lots of problems here.  

[Saverio C.]

How dare you not wear shoes when you are seducing the little boy. That's improper.