Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Saverio C.]

Mayhap a tanner skin tone is needed. You look like you could use some sun.  

[CR Kyrie]

I haven't seen that cloak in forever! Great job resurrecting it, but maybe it should have stayed dead D=  

[pickle relish]

The cigarette seems a little out of place, and so does the sibyl's incantation curse. The rest of it matches, and looks good, though.

The good news is, I think the curse will kill you before the cigarettes do. :3  

[invisible-weirdo]

Oh wow...It's real surprising to see you in an outfit like this, but I like it 3nodding Although the eyes seem a tad bit out of place, but that's all.  

[DaisukeOrDark]

I like the dark madam motif going on.
But why the flaming turtle?
Its seems to be out of place.  

[CR Kyrie]

Right now, the green of the eyes is off-putting to the rest of the avatar. Once you have the full avatar that appears in your signature, it'll look a lot better, since there's a little green on the abdomen.

[edit]Hee hee, I sniped you, pickle ;D  

[pickle relish]

The red and black matches really well together. I kind of feel like you need shoes, though.

Edit: Ranuu, you're evil. But your avi is still nice. xD  

[Sanzoskitsune]

I swear your avi is so Ala-esque, I like the way the items work together, its very smezzy  

[CR Kyrie]

I almost went after your hair color as a critique, but the more I look at it, the more it works. Well done there, changing my initial thoughts D:  

[Saverio C.]

You look European but you have Japanese steel! YOU MAKE NO SENSE  

[Erverain]

You've got quite a big gun there. Everything meshes well, as well as your character. You love blowing things up, be it buildings, people, or emotions.  

[CR Kyrie]

The same could be said for you, you know. Your avatar flows well, and shows a techie identity D: the time of Ragnarok is truly upon us.  

[Kire Kaysan]

Your avi works well Ranuu, although your hair doesn't feel like it goes with the colors of the clothing. The hat fixes that problem, & the strip in the pants is an odd color and is distracting. Overall, it is very good.  

[Saverio C.]

Way too much going on man. Just calm it down so I can focus.  

[Kire Kaysan]

Very plain and simple. It's a good look Sav and I don't think you need to change.