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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:40 pm
I really like the concept... The only thing that bothers me is that the hem of that skirt isn't as flowy and delicate as the rest of the outfit... I'd has used the Winter Rose or the Soft Feather dresses. Other than that, your design is beautiful. biggrin  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:56 pm
It's nice and characteristic. I'd suggest you get a Tomahawk or a Lumberjack axe instead of that Kunai. If you want to add a little more to the clothing, get some Hand and feet wraps or mami feet.  

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:21 pm
Reminds me of the babysitter I had in the early '90s. It's very nostalgic.  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:37 am
It a great icy merman avi, Kusa. The blues are a bit contrasting, but that really isn't a problem. I don't think anything needs to be changed.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:31 am
i really like it. flows nicely. =D  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:20 pm
I like it though I feel that it's a little too top-heavy in terms of clothes (particularly around the neck area). I wish that that form allowed you to wear something around your feet, because that might even it out, but I think that all you can look into is like leg warmers and such. But still, I like what you've done.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:29 pm
I love yours, just without the turtle. The colors clash.

I tried to add socks. Does that help?  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:18 pm
The hat really cuts into your head space. It makes it look like you've got no neck. The sparkles may also be a bit much.  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:32 pm
This one kinda reminds me of Nanashijin's old style. It's a nice eastern dark cult caster setup. My only suggestion would be an item that doesn't even exist.  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 7:55 pm
I like those items paired together. Could use something white & black on the head, though, for a bit more balance. Just something small, maybe black and white barrettes?  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:26 pm
Very cute! My only suggestions would be to do something about the socks, they look a little funny with the shoes. Maybe no socks? I'm not sure... The background looks a little off to me, too, but I don't know why. >>;
But over all, very nice. I like the theme. x3  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:24 pm
Your avatar's colors are really mismatched and those floating things make you look really off balance. Kind of plain. :/ I'm sure you're cosplaying and its the closest you could get to that character, but I can't place it at all.  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:48 am
Not exactly sure what to say. The gold shoes match with that section of your overall avatar, yes, but it doesn't really go with the rest of your avatar's body. The wings are weird, and I don't see an overall theme (with the skull, aforementioned wings, and the 'thug' style clothing).

I guess I'm saying that I don't really see a flow, and that I'd like to.  
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:14 pm
I like it, even the gold eyes. It was well thought out.  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:28 pm
It's businessman Sav what more can I say. It's good.  
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