Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kusaragi]

Very musical. I like the use of the Samurai crest over your other hat, it's a nice ascent piece. However I would use a different hat, the flat top makes it look like you have a buzz cut.  

[Taeryyn]

Very blue! The only thing I'm not crazy about is the hat. It's hard to find that bright basic blue, but I think a different hat or item on your head would look better.  

[124-C]

I think that the '?' over your head says it all. Those pants make your legs look like twigs and the vest looks a little odd in the way that it layers over the shirt. I can see how the avatar is fun, but it looks a little off...  

[Kire Kaysan]

The Nightmare jacket is an off black, but you can't do much about that. Everything else, except the random alien raygun, is fine.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

the dash of blue is random, but it adds something nice. A nice dash of color.  

[Kusaragi]

Definitely looks interesting, what was the focus on your avatar though? The reason to put it together? Just curious after all. ^_^

I guess I don't REALLY need a hat.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Kusa, first of all, I LOVE your avvy!!

I put this avvy together because it reflects the main character in one of my new stories I am writing as a trapped/shamed angel.  

[Sentama Lin]

The corset colour is what bothers me the most about it. It's very bright compared to the other shades and kinda distracting.

If only you could wear shoes with the wings.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

I love everything about yours. It just flows really nicely and just FITS.

I've been trying to add some more blue in it and color. Cause at one point, it was all black and white.  

[Kusaragi]

There might be some colored stockings that might work for your avatar, check Tektek and see what you can find. (I decided to add a weapon, I forgot I had enough material to make this. xd )  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

The weapon looks good. Maybe experiment with different poses?

I think I found perfect socks!!  

[pickle relish]

It's pretty cute, but I think you need shoes.  

[GuillotineGirl]

I don't really care for the ball and chain on her ankle. It seems to... slave-ish to me. I don't like the eye patch either. Other than that, I think it's fine. biggrin  

[Sentama Lin]

You're a bit generic right now -- that is, my only gripe is that at the moment I don't see anything that distinguishes you from the rest of Gaia. Then again, you may be new, so that's to be expected. Still, work on creating your own kind of style. smile

Oh, Cadhla. You were my sketch victim of the day.  

[Phaeton]

I like it. It forms a complex urban youngster who doesn't come off as emo. Maybe just a Byronic hero. It seems like a regular person might look that way, well except for the shuriken. lol

Very nice.