Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

First of all, thanks so much Lin for the sketch!! =D

Eh, not really my style. The stuff around the eyes is bugging me. Maybe bring in a little more red in the hair or shoes or something?  

[Roland Karloseth]

A bit basic for my tastes. Sorry, not a fan.  

[Taeryyn]

Very fiery~ I like it. The ground/background is a nice touch. My only suggestion would be to try some new pants. The ones you have on aren't bad by any means, but they're more grey than black. I'd try to get some that are a deeper black.

But really, I do love it the way it is. ^^  

[Alaois]

As you were, I was

DO ME!!!!
-coughs at the way that could be taken-

interesting concept, not something I'm a big fan of, but I do love the use of both green and blue, the two colors fade together rather well.

And I am well aware I do not have any golden colors below the waistline...so please any suggestions would be very welcomed.

As I am, you will be

 

[CR Kyrie]

There's something about your avatar that seems off to me, but I can't place my finger on it. I like the general coloring of it. The dark skin is a great contrast to the white/gold outfit. I must ask you, however, not to try and confuse me, because you do so have gold below your waist D:

I like gold accents on avatars, by the way ^^ you probably couldn't tell.  

[Alaois]

Ranuu

There's something about your avatar that seems off to me, but I can't place my finger on it. I like the general coloring of it. The dark skin is a great contrast to the white/gold outfit. I must ask you, however, not to try and confuse me, because you do so have gold below your waist D:

I like gold accents on avatars, by the way ^^ you probably couldn't tell.

As you were, I was

I didn't have gold on it this morning stare when I posted the question

As I am, you will be

 

[Sentama Lin]

I feel the same way Ranuu does. There's something that just doesn't sit well with me, but I can't put my finger on it. I think it might be I wish your hair was gold.  

[CR Kyrie]

Alaois

As you were, I was

I didn't have gold on it this morning stare when I posted the question

As I am, you will be

Thanks for:
-Your razor sharp net, capturing and calling out the sarcasm of my message, (by the way, that's also sarcasm) and
-The critique of my avatar. You're breaking my rules =(


As for Sentama, I like the risque-ness of your avatar. Also, the red and green colors make me happy for nature! Haha, that sounded really fruity of me. Finally, I'm glad someone can make use of the masque. I tried using it for some time, to no avail. Congrats!

[Edit] WAIT A SECOND, is that the unsightly body hair?  

[pickle relish]

I like the color scheme, but I sort of think it would be better without the Hermes Moon. Otherwise, it's very nice.  

[Elcia]

I like it Pickle. Red and black is balanced out well. My only complaint is that one feather on your hat is not quite as black as the rest but all well.  

[Sentama Lin]

Oh my. I can see what you were going for, but my critque would be that I'd prefer a Black/Red Coloured Lolita with the scythe, rather than the light blue.

@Ranuu: To give credit where credit is due, the MASQUE + Zorro Mask combo was from aretoo. And yes, it is the unsightly body hair. I've been trying for AGES to make an avatar using it.  

[Saverio C.]

Ok, how about we don't scare me with near nudity.  

[pickle relish]

You know you like it, Savvy.

You make a pretty good cowboy. The colors all match pretty well, and it looks convincing.  

[Sentama Lin]

Love the colour scheme, but I wish there were better shades. Is there an equivalent from the TORQUE shades set? I think those look a lot better.  

[124-C]

It's classic silly, campy Gaia-style. I question the inclusion of the frostbite blade on a thematic level, but I suppose that it doesn't detract from the attractiveness of the avatar.

RE: Pickle's Shades — The red superstar ones may work too...