Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

liking it, but you should bring the brown out more. it immediately draws your eye to the middle of your avvy.  

[dark_wyvern_panda]

im an item whore so ignore what i say, buy you need more items, or maybe a good few that leave a subtle impression  

[YunieCookie]

It's fairly nekkid right now, but once you get the rest of the items on your list, it'll look quite good 3nodding  

[Erverain]

It's nice, but the shoes don't really go with it. Maybe a lighter color? Or a darker dress...  

[invisible-weirdo]

The overall neutral color of the outfit makes the pocketwatch stand out an awful lot. It's not that it doesn't really fit, but it's just that it really pops out being so bright and colorful and all. And thematically, the maid's headband doesn't fit, but I know you're wearing that because of the BOMC thing so it's all good.  

[Sentama Lin]

The only qualm I have is it's pretty simple. It doesn't have the kind of personal jenesaisquoi that I like to see in avatars, some form of detail that sets it apart from other avatars. Though, Lemmy is there, so I guess that counts.  

[Elcia]

Oh Lin is riding into town to give his lover a rose!? Yes? No? blaugh

Well I think the only thing that I don't like is the scarf. It 'doesn't stand out but it doesn't add very much either.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Ohmygod I love it.
The combination of items is so perfect and you've managed to make an absolutely gorgeous avi~
Very well done, Elcia 3nodding

Lin: Oh whoops ^^; The outfit I had on earlier was a quickly thrown together to be my 'smezzy(ish) love-harem' outfit.
I've changed back to the one I wanted critiqued now.  

[Kusaragi]

Oh gods, you have TWO flaming turtles now. WHAT DOES IT MEAN?!?!? xd

I like the overall scheme and I like the gouged eyes you used. I have to take another look at it to see if I would do anything else.  

[Sentama Lin]

Is there really anything I can critique? The thematic blues and blacks make for a cool avatar, and the spikes just remind me of Sonic gone wrong. I'm really not fond of the scythe though, mainly because it's not quite black and blue enough.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

I like it, but it doesn't seem like you enough. razz  

[ll - Vanille - ll]

I really like it but I feel like there should be something different for the feet/leg area. neutral  

[Erverain]

You look a bit like a very well-dressed stoner going through withdrawal symptoms... And the rabbit really has no purpose, right?  

[Sentama Lin]

I feel males can be maids without the frilly headpiece, but, I understand the necessity.

@Cadhla: You haven't noticed my avatars for that long. I have a large arsenal of looks.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

lol yea seems so. I like that one tho better then the other one.