The Writing Thread

[xXxAngelsDestinyxXx]

I tired to read some of your story Lewis, it pretty good of what I read, seeing not a lot of people posted anything, I figured I would. I like to write poems in my classes at school when I get really bored... I hope everybody likes them... Please comment on them, I want to know what people really think of them!

heart s Jessica

This is one of my most recent poems... I like it, but I want to hear what you guys think please and thanks... I called it

My Angel - By: Jessica Holland

I got the news today,
I see the memories fading away,
I have no clue why,
But I cant say goodbye,
To my first love,
I begin to look above,
As I fall to my knees,
Im begging God please,
Not to let him go like this,
I could only wish for one more kiss,
I love him so much,
I miss his tender touch,
Tomorrow is the day,
Ill see him in the coffin that he lays,
As all of us say our final words,
I look up at the birds,
And I saw an eagle in the sky,
Thats when I knew it was time to say goodbye,
And at that moment I closed my eyes,
And I forgot all the lies,
The moment I did,
I forgave that kid,
I felt a breeze across my face,
And just incase,
I wiped away my tears,
And forgot all about my fears,
Because when I looked up into the sky,
I saw my true love, my angel flying by.

Thanks... Please comment on so I know how I'm doing... lol or if you guys see anything that can be fixed, spelling or make it better... thanks again!  

[xXxAngelsDestinyxXx]

Whoops... My computer is a P.O.S I didn't see half the poems people wrote... but I liked the one poem by insanemale.... it was good I feel like I can relate in some ways]

heart s  

[Matrias Fierno]

I am going to write a poem, so you can see my style. This is my "Element" free verse poem. I just wrote it because I liked the idea, and I waned to try free-verse.

Matrias Fierno

Water / Fire

Birth by water,
Element of healing,
Soothing, creating,
And spiritual cleansing,

Death by fire,
Element of passion,
Too strong to be controlled,
And burns at the touch.

This birth, that death,
This healing, that passion,
This soothing, that burning,
This for, that against.

I would say that I like it.  

[Bishop186]

MrJimmy

Err... awkword somone revived my old thread. *pats thread* You're a good old thread, arnt you?

I decided the beast needed to be reawakened and released upon the world. And no, I'm not talking about the tentacle rape monster -- but that one can reawaken and run amuck too, if it so desires.  

[-Isel-]

Some poetry exists in my files.

I have a story I'm working on, it's at about 13 pages now in a very tiny font without proper two-space sentence spacing. The first chapter is 9 pages... jeesh.  

[Jessi_Babii_10_13_90]

Isel In Chains

Some poetry exists in my files.

I have a story I'm working on, it's at about 13 pages now in a very tiny font without proper two-space sentence spacing. The first chapter is 9 pages... jeesh.

I'll have to set aside a day for that one.  

[-Isel-]

MrJimmy

Isel In Chains

Some poetry exists in my files.

I have a story I'm working on, it's at about 13 pages now in a very tiny font without proper two-space sentence spacing. The first chapter is 9 pages... jeesh.

I'll have to set aside a day for that one.

Of course, the cycle of editing and re-editing has caused me to take a year and a half to get those pages done. I actually had one whole novel's worth about a year ago, but now I'm going back and expanding it HUGELY.  

[Lily-Hith-Silme]

This was a poem I wrote while I was in Creative Writing class in 8th grade. I don't know what inspired me to write about a blind man's point of view. But...Here it is.

Comments are welcome smile .

Lily-Hith-Silme

Blind Man’s Wish

O, how I wish to see trees moves,
To see sky’s color of blue.
Shining color of silver;
The magnificent drawing she drew.

What I wish is to see--
At last, ‘tis my dream.
To see the colors of the trees,
All the world as it should be.

My wish is granted, but for one brief day.
To view the world a brand new way.
I see the wind blow the hair of the trees.
I see the small dots on the bees.

I no longer see everything in front.
Everything’s turned black as the night.
But God will guide me through each day.
This is the Blind man’s wish today.

Well...that's it. Blind Man's Wish....  

[Dexandre]

Hmm... lemme contribute. There's a lot on my mind now, why not share a little piece of my head? XD I'll give a cookie to anyone who knows what I wrote about, the little cryptic devil I am.

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Flash.
Everyone is sitting, quiet, but laughing. Those soft noises fill in for the lack of voice, but the illumination cuts out as fast as it came.

Flash.
There it goes again... Everyone's standing, freeze-framed in what looks like lagging in the game of life.

Flash.
And again.

Flash.
Poses, everyone in that ice blue light is posing. They're standing pretty for the darkness to rise once more.

Flash.
There are too many to count. They say if you live like this long enough,

Flash.
live under this kind of light, you'll go insane. Yet

Flash.
my thoughts are heightened. I already have the ability to map out a novel thick enough to kill on impact.

Flash.
But, maybe I'm the one already dead.

Flash.
The music is synchronized, the loud music binding and gagging yet another sense.

Flash.
But at least there's still smell.

Flash.
And taste. Oh, and touch.

Flash.
The only solace here is that little stick.

Flash.
The only thing tying me down to realization that my brain works still.

Flash.
Lucky for me it never stops glowing.

The song slows, the beat drops, the hum of consistent light returns. Dizziness pours through my body like poison, but I'll do it again, and again, and again. This will never end until I get too old.

 

[Jessi_Babii_10_13_90]

lol, You were at the discocheque, wern't you?  

[Dexandre]

MrJimmy

lol, You were at the discocheque, wern't you?

Okay, so it wasn't that hard. ^^; *Hands over cookie*  

[Jessi_Babii_10_13_90]

Dexandre

MrJimmy

lol, You were at the discocheque, wern't you?

Okay, so it wasn't that hard. ^^; *Hands over cookie*

Ehh, it was pretty subtle at first, I had no idea wht you were writing about 'till the end, it's good work when you can confuse a person unti lt end.

*takes cookie, munches it, and then dashes the crumbs off like ash off a cigar*

And then there's the fact that I've been to a lot of discocheques in my day.

Roffle-mao.  

[Celestial Burden]

My stories tend to be really long so yeah. I writ poetry though. This one was for a contest in a religious guild to celebrate Litha the other day. It might be lacking because it was impromptu so yeah. Ah, by the way, Kyle and Devon are dead siblings. I posted this on Deviantart too.

"A dream?
What is this I see
Is that blood on the sheets and my sister laying there
Wait, I turn around and look again,
Now what I see is different.
Could this be a dream?

My sister is playing, but...no
That isn't my sister that's me, but who is it that I'm with
I'm growing older and now I stare back at myself
Something's different, something's wrong
That's not me, not the real me, or am I fake
Is this all a dream?

I look around and see an awesome sight
Children are playing and the sun is shineing
Am I seeing what I think I am
Is that Kyle
Is that Devon
Or is this all a dream?

I wake up and look around
I'm in my bed
No blood, no dead sister
I look out side, no other 'me's'
No, there are no children playing,
Kyle and Devon aren't there
I guess it really was a dream, or was it? "  

[ellania]

How many chapters it is you said?  

[Matrias Fierno]

I wrote this one while on vacation, and it currently has no name. But, I'm gonna post it anyway,

Matrias Fierno

"Untitled"

The lost memory,
Comes back to me,
For I have been gone,
For far too long.

The smiling faces,
The unfound places,
Flicker to my mind,
Like sea on the shore.

I knew the faces,
Found unfound places,
Healed my broken soul,
In the middle of nowhere.

The joy and love calls to me,
It finds the lost memory,
It refreshes the mind,
Brings me together...

And makes me whole.