Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

not liking how the thing you're holding is covering most of your face. Makes it seem cluttered.  

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

I like the concept, but I think that a haori would add detail and visual interest to the outfit. The shoes don't really go... I think a pair of sandals would look better... maybe try the otami greaves? Also, the Cherry Blossom MC would be a cute addition, and would help the pink to look less jarring next to the green. I always try to incorporate 3-5 pieces with each color on an outfit, to create balance in the colors.

Overall, it's very cute. though. Good work incorporating a non-Oriental fan into the outfit. biggrin  

[Saverio C.]

The gold lining throws it off, but the rest is fine. Doesn't really do it for me.  

[pickle relish]

The gold and silver of the hammer doesn't completely match those on the armor. Neither does the cape. But they work anyway, so I'm just nitpicking. It looks nice.  

[Elcia]

Pickle is now the Goddess of Love!?
I like it, though I sort of wish your sandals did more for you. I think that is because of the color and general top heavy-ness of the avi.
But besides that its a great avi.  

[CR Kyrie]

Whoa O= totally badass. I love the whole 'rising undead' feeling I get from it. Everything fits together very well, and I can't see anything I'd take away from it =]  

[Erverain]

Oh lord, it's Number 2. Seriously though, you've got the feeling of "corporate b*****d" down very well, especially with the wine glass. It almost looks as if you're glowering at us.  

[Saverio C.]

The vest is very bust looking, and kinda takes away from an otherwise great avatar  

[CR Kyrie]

You've nailed this as a great avatar in the dual eye colors. I assume you based the avatar off of those colors originally, but it looks like it all worked out by accident. Without them, I don't think the avatar would work well as it is, but. . . wow, I'm extremely impressed =]

I love the colors. Were I braver (and not obsessed with the 'corporate b*****d' look), I'd venture out into color myself.

Also, I think Erverain looks kind of like Brandon Flowers, lol.  

[Saverio C.]

Nah I wanted to use the leggings and it grew from there. It turned out nice, but I think I need some arm tats to finish it off.

You look very professional yourself. I like the cold demeanor  

[PendragonX9]

my one critique is that it is quite bland, the browns all seem to meld together, i'd say try to liven it up a bit with some variation  

[Saverio C.]

The same could be said about yours, the little details are lost in the monotone  

[invisible-weirdo]

I like it, though I'm not too fond of the way the pimp hat sits on your head and I think a gold pocketwatch would go along better with the whole outfit. Though other than that, it's very well done.

Ranuu

Also, I think Erverain looks kind of like Brandon Flowers, lol.

lol He does!  

[124-C]

Hrmm... those Skittles eyes are really hard to use because they're shaped a little different from the other eyes, and the masks on Gaia tend to be funny as well, so all together it makes your mask look like it's actually on crooked.

The avatar is amazing, though, and if I hadn't really looked at it I wouldn't have noticed that.  

[Kire Kaysan]

The hat does not match because it's a lighter grey. Other than that the avi is good.