Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[CR Kyrie]

It would be impossible to give you a negative review. I love the way the gold is accented against the neutrals (off-white/white/black), the theme (very undeadlike, might I say =3) and how it all fits together so well that it seems to flow right off the page.

If I were to say anything, I think I'd have to say a more zombie-like hairstyle would be great, but I'm not even sure there is one, so I can't actually complain.  

[invisible-weirdo]

I like what you did with the black ops eyepatch (I think that's it) and the western zodiac mask right there 3nodding Anyway, overall it's very good. I just wish the hat was a little darker or the silver bits were a bit more blue to match the blue-ish-ness on the suit. I really do like it~  

[Kire Kaysan]

I love the raggedy orphan look you have invis. It's adorable although the colors of the dress and head wrap don't match  

[Shram]

Personally I figure you should remove that flame thingy  

[CR Kyrie]

I admire that you have an entire month's collectibles on at once, but neither of them match the rest of your avatar, which is primarily black/white. Purple flames and blue pixie don't fit D=  

[Elcia]

I like the red caped avenger type theme but I'm not too sure about the winged sandals.  

[Shram]

I feel the eyes should been there.. the blackness makes it feel... odd  

[Saverio C.]

The purple and red don't work  

[Koneko Midoria]

The colors aren't balanced out enough.
Yet, an avatar doesn't have to be matching for someone to like it.

It's interesting within itself.
Yet if you're going for any sort of matching,
Try fanning the teal, grey-ish white, and yellow [ in order of what should be fanned out first ].
The lightning bolts, never liked that item, but you're going with a theme I see, they move out the yellow, but not in the right areas in my opinion.



>w<;

 

[invisible-weirdo]

Very nice. The colors are well-balanced and nothing really seems out of place. I really like it 3nodding

And for mine, I know the dress doesn't quite match the headwrap (a little too brown) but I don't know what to replace it with. The stuff I looked at seem either too white or too black for it =/ Any suggestions would be welcome.  

[CR Kyrie]

The headwrap is close enough for the required purpose =] everything works well enough, really, and you've succeeded in making an avatar that is blatantly 'cute' and 'innocent' =] which is hard enough to do, the way Gaia's been going in the last couple of years.  

[Koneko Midoria]

Tons of red.
I like the color red, but not as much as cerulean....
[ D8 Yay random ]

While it's not my type nor 'balanced',
it's still good enough and interesting.
[ Suggestion: Move the black out more and put something on the head ]

Avatars don't have to be a certain way or theme.
Just as long as the person who's the owner of the Avatar likes it.

That's all that matters.

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[Sentama Lin]

The belt. It's what bothers me from an otherwise dynamic outfit.  

[Koneko Midoria]

I like it!
Nothin' much really to say 'cept get yellow at the bottom.

 

[124-C]

I came in here expecting to critique Lin's avatar, so imagine my surprise when I found you instead!

Anyway, down to business... Your avatar is really well executed. The colors are well balanced and it really did catch my eye—makes me want to make an avatar around my CN Scarf again—but I do see a couple of things that just bug me a little. You're wearing two bikini tops, are both really necessary? Also, would the corresponding Kachina face paint mess up the eyes? The pallor of your face is such that it's not a big deal, but the white of the face paint would really sell it. [Check that, I'm stupid...]

By the way, the use of the red socks is brilliant.