Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Koneko Midoria]

Your avatar is well executed,
I like it -- it's simple in my eyes, but great.

[ TO ANSWER YOU 8D ]

Yes, both bikini tops are necessary.

If you put the Luscious Red Skimpy Swimtop on this is what you get.


Instead of a fuller top.

Look at my avatar and then look at the example of the one without the other top.

 

[pickle relish]

The colors match, and I can't think of anything that could be added to make it better. Very nice.  

[PendragonX9]

well to be honest i really like your avi, the theme and colors work well however since i have no desire to die i will stretch my self and say that there seems to be (and this could just be my cpu being evil again) a touch of red in your eyes that contrasts with the colors  

[Koneko Midoria]

I like your avatar, well thought out and interesting.
Colors match up as well, nothing really bad to say 'bout it.

Also, that's PINK in her eyes. =w=
Comes off one of the stone thingy mer...bobbers... thingies..

D8

 

[Erverain]

Like Tsuji said, your grasp of color schemes here works great, and you look almost as if you walked out of some sort of Gothic-styled graphic novel. That said, perhaps a shorter scarf or muffler would distract the eye less?  

[Saverio C.]

Very Ninja like. The hat might or might not work I'm not sure. If there is a weak point then it's there  

[Koneko Midoria]

Simple, but still matches.
At least if you're going for the business look it's okay.

I'm not into simple avatars,
but -- doesn't matter what I think.

 

[Saverio C.]

They Eyes draw my attention away from the rest of the avatar.  

[124-C]

You look like an a*****e.  

[Phaeton 2]

Awesome. Maybe it could use a bigger bow-tie but those don't exist. Maybe get the Team Barton Tennis shoes too.  

[Sentama Lin]

Rugged. I like it. As a critique... hrmmm... I really can't think of one this time.  

[pickle relish]

The enchanted strings sticks out a bit, but that's about all I can think of. The rest matches really well. I like it. ^^  

[Koneko Midoria]

It's adorable.

I don't like the skirt.
If you're going to keep it, draw the blue down.

If not, a suggestion.
White skirt, blue sock, white shoes or white AND blue shoes.

Probably new set of eyes too, since there's pink in the one.
It's not too bad, just a few suggestions, over all it's adorable.

 

[Elcia]

Well I think critiquing yours is not really necessary, my only complains are my biases to certain items which is irrelevant.

It's creepy and really well put together. ^_^  

[Saverio C.]

Another solid Avatar from you, you might want to enter the Arena if you haven't already.