Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[The Dinosaur Next Door]

Makes me think of an indie Dr. Who. I really like how the dark background makes the teal bits really pop, but at the same time, the avi's actual hair and face kind of get lost in all the adornments. Mysterious. biggrin

(The premise for mine is a young demoness learning to command the troops of hell.)  

[Phaeton 2]

It comes together well, colors are consistent, It isn't too loaded down with items, but what are those two gray peaks on top of your head? Those can go.  

[xDarkPisces]

Your avatar makes me think of Rise Against songs. I like it. Almost makes me want to keep writing that story I was... work... ing...

I like the general unbalance of colors. It adds to the vagabond look. I would suggest adding some detail to the lower portion if you can. Any chance you have a burn barrel?  

[Saverio C.]

The Center is clustered and the fish tail isn't my thing, but I see what you are doing and it is a good job  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Nice...the pants are bothering me though. Personally have a vendetta against mixing brown and black, but that's just me.  

[NativeBlueXV]

Its not very colorful, but very beautiful. Pure. I've always wanted to do a pure white avi, but it never looks good. I like it  

[Elcia]

It's a little early for holiday avi isn't it ._.
Don't mind that though I like it.
My only suggestion is a different choice of shoes. Those really are not gaia's greatest pair of shoes in general.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Love it!! It really flows nicely. I'd like to see a big wow factor, but again that's just a personal thing. it looks great!  

[Elcia]

It's nice and simple. I think the Silent Night background would really make you pop but it's not necessary  

[Trish the Stalker]

The hair colour doesn't quite match.

-Formerly La Belle Isolde-

 

[Kusaragi]

That's nice I like the whole broken love/slave girl angle you have going.

One thing that might REALLY set this off is the beat up face of the Masquerade.  

[Kusaragi]

Ok... that was odd... my post is on the top of the page... But is meant for Trish the Stalker.  

[Kire Kaysan]

It's a good bondage look. I'm not really sure if there is anything to change and i can't think of any.  

[invisible-weirdo]

For Kire...I think: It's perfect, but I do believe I've said that already =P Really though I can't think of anything that could make it better.

Anyway, I could really use some constructive criticism with mine. I haven't really liked the avis that I've been churning out lately D: