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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:45 am
It's got a very earthy princess feel and I like. I'm immediately drawn to the blue at the bottom too. Any way to sneak some green in there?  
PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:07 pm
There was and I think I like it better. Thanks ^_^

I can't complain about yours. I would just play with how you hold the hammer to see which is the most flattering. At the moment we can see the outline of your back which it looks a little empty and choppy, probably due to how gaia layers things.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:46 am
Wonderful tribute to the goddess of earth. Which is also where this site gets it's namesake. I love the Gift of the Goddess' laurels, they work well as a contrast and a piece that pulls everything together as an avatar. Well done.

It's kind of odd that my avatar is taking up the opposite theme.  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:10 pm
It's not really my favourite avatar you've made. Rather than blending together, all the different "fiery" pieces stand out on their own, so it's not very ...cohesive, I guess?

I like the whole fire demon/god idea, and again, I'm just being fussy. It is very eye-catching, and I like how you used the red diamond. 3nodding Overall it's good. biggrin  

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 6:26 pm
Love it! It reminds me of the dude from Treasure Planet. smile Nice use of the moon.  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:40 pm
I like it.
The Hammer kinda throws me off quite a bit.
The color is alittle off from the other reds you have.
But all in all it looks good biggrin
 

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:36 am
Change your shoes to something black and glossy. They stand out a lot.
There is also the issue of the hat not being blue enough for coat or green enough for you eyes, but definitely change the shoes it'll make a world of difference.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 1:22 pm
I really quite enjoy this one. heart

Only thing I could MAYBE suggest is seeing about other bits to add to the surroundings, buuut that may clutter it, so....
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:17 pm
it's so cute!!! I think that sums it up. It makes me smile. smile  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 4:58 pm
hmm I do like your hammer...you kind of look like you would be a match for a human  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:03 pm
Hmm... Fire, leafyness, a trident, it looks kind of mish-mashed together. That isn't allways a bad thing but I don't particularly support this combo.  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:53 pm
The sword and shield just don't work. The Sword is too thin for the heavy plate mail, and the shield is not right to me. Granted there is no good shield.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:48 pm
Extremely simple, but still a bit of a favorite.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:25 am
oo pretty. looks like a centaur/minotaur mix  

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:11 am
Please remember this is a critic thread. It is mish-mashed together and verges on the poor noobie side (I can only assume you are either relatively new to gaia or not on frequently) but you have items that are good there.
Take away the trident for starters since the color matches nothing else.
Check out the fire related aspects of the titan's seed and see what else the sash does.
And remember often, less is more.
 
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