Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[sth the relinquished]

The gold stands out, you shouldn't have two seperate colors of metal. And the pants are, I don't know... poofy? But aside from that, good.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

The random splash of color around the eyes and face are bothering me. The scooter thing is also kind of bothering me. I mean, it's ok, but it doesn't flow right to me. Very simple.  

[somegirl328]

I love it! It looks like a princess type deal.  

[Kusaragi]

Very straightforward, simple color scheme, but it seems to work. I like how the gauntlet and Gift of the Goddess work so well together.  

[Saverio C.]

The top, bottom, and the sword are really cool. Just they don't look good together.  

[sth the relinquished]

Very simple, which is nice. The shoes don't entirely fit, though, I might suggest the blue work shoes, or something a little darker.  

[Kusaragi]

Captured the creepy doctor avatar down. What is that under your boot though? I'm not sure that really fits the theme. Otherwise it's good.  

[Phaeton]

It sorta fits for an evil villain or the Leading minion role. The gold armor doesn't really fit with the darker under tones and it isn't close enough to the coloring of the sword handle to really work here. It's neat though.  

[Kusaragi]

Very "Dark Wedding" Reminds me of Corps Bride. Very elegant and streamlined.  

[sth the relinquished]

I like the two-tone color scheme, it's hard to find a good white avi. The only thing I would change is the mask. It kinda breaks the flow, for me.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Creepy, so creepy, and it so works. I love it!  

[sth the relinquished]

It's not creepy. He has a flower.


And I'm posting now because yours is the avi I've been hoping to crit for the past page and a half.


The ribbon that the birds are holding makes an excellent counter to the shape of the dress. The violin is darker than the rest of the piece, but in a way that adds a focal point, so where I'd normally dislike it, I love it. The pink is nice, and the whole thing looks ver pastel, which is excellent work. One of the better Avi's I've seen, good job.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Even though he has a flower, it still makes him creepy! but kind of in an Edward Scissorhands creepy. Like a nice creepy.

Thanks so much. smile  

[Roland Karloseth]

"In every loss, in every lie, in every truth that you'd deny...

I like it, it meshes well in my opinion. The only thing I don't much care for is the eyes.

...and each regret and each good-bye, was a mistake too great to hide"

 

[Kusaragi]

Wonderful Link cosplay. I like the item you used for Navi. Well done and easily identifiable.