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PostPosted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:07 pm
Very very nice. I was going to say it seems a bit top heavy, but the tail and the way you hold the shovel offsets that pretty well.

Although now I worry for the poor little Cheep...
 
PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:12 pm
The only thing I'm not really liking is the two different colored eyes. Those eyes always freak me out.  

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:26 pm
The only thing not working for me is the fact you have cat heads for feet.  
PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:59 pm
I would suggest a different top hat. The mad hatter's doesn't mesh well with generally black and red clothing. The rest works quite well together. Maybe a different set of sunglasses too.  

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 2:42 pm
A little confused. The eyes are puzzling me and the wings. I get the overall idea, but I like matchy matchy and I don't see any kind of true pattern or theme of colors.  
PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:48 pm
Very nice contrast in colors and overall layout. I like the tattoos and sparse clothing, but I'm not sure I like your choice of shoes. But that's my only complaint.  

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:03 am
Seems to me like you're trying too much at once. Those boots and their flamboyancy demand alot of attention, and when you don't have the rest of the avi set to match... It kinda makes them seem clunky. And when you have both red and orange as operating colors on an avi, like you're trying, you have to be careful. The red isn't focused well enough to stand out, and kinda seems like wanna-be orange.  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 1:56 pm
I'm not sure I understand the need for the red glow things coming out of your ears. I get the whole secret agent kind of feel, but I'm left confused.  

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:03 am
I like it smile  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:48 am
You really need to make a theme or take some of the clutter off.  

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:16 pm
Clutter taken off.
I still like it. Liked it better with kitty-slippers, but still like it.  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:09 pm
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User Image It really makes no sense to me whatsoever. Sorry, not really a fan of it.



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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:11 pm
Very good hero avi, I like that it's not overly flamboyant, and those are some good eyes, mate. The only thing that's throwing me off is the pants. I think brown or red would be a more suitable color. Bright and centered, it makes it seem like the pants are the focal point...  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:06 pm
Very nice. I found myself reading your post with a british-like accent because of your avi (The 'wot-wot, cheerio' type, not the 'oy there guvna' type).

Anyway, there's really nothing to critique about it. It's a bit on the simple side, but it works just fine like that.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:48 pm
"Every scar is a lesson...


As I said before, I really like it. My only complaint is the mask, I just... don't like it for some reason confused



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