Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Sentama Lin]

The wings in that outfit, for some reason, are grating; and the lack of a colour scheme is getting to me too.  

[emmmahy]

Reminds me of matrix  

[Kusaragi]

you keep finding interesting combinations with the Dionaesil. I think the greenSplit Dress would fit really well with what you have on now.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Love it! It flows really nicely.  

[Roland Karloseth]

"Every scar is a lesson...

the flower... it does not mesh anymore!

Putting the flower aside, I think it would look cool if you used an item that gave you pure black skin and used white tattoos on top of that. 3nodding It is a great avi though. Just now, that flower... it's bugging me confused

...Every battle a test of what you have learned."

 

[Taeryyn]

I know you're cosplaying this Riku guy, so I looked up some pictures of him. I don't really think the hair looks like his hair at all. Otherwise, it seems to look like the reference.  

[Phaeton]

@ Rolland It's nice, somewhat simplistic. It could be spiced up a bit. I didn't know it was cosplay.

(Editing) xp

Um... I don't think the hair really fits in this instance. The shading caused by the black star doesn't really help either. I'd just suggest a dark hair color.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

the pants are bothering me a bit. they seem so...straight and narrow. But besides that, I love it!  

[invisible-weirdo]

I really do love it. Although, with the purely black and white color scheme you've got going there, the color of your skin sorta sticks out. Considering the prices of the Masterpieces item and white body dye though, it's fine the way it is.  

[Kusaragi]

Nice spiritual "Dream Weaver" feel to it. I like the items used overall and like the use of the staff/lantern thing. i never got a chance to use that item to potential. Even the thought bubble fits the avatar because it could be a dream that needs to be sent. I like it.  

[sth the relinquished]

On the surface, its' nice. All black, the shape is good. However, you have too many shades of black. It's distracting, and breaks the flow that would otherwise be there. Good overall, and nice shape, but unfortunate execution. I want to like it, I really do, but.. I can't.  

[Elcia]

I rather like it. Though I wish you could get a little more of that green somewhere else on the avi.
You could try getting another otami piece and see how the belt looks or check out some of the reversible bracelets to see if the turquoise matches.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Great earthyness going on. I really like it. It may be a bit cluttered though for my taste, but the theme you have going on it awesome.

((I'm working right now to buy Masterpieces!! Hopefully, I'll get it really soon. Haggling prices is always fun...))  

[emmmahy]

Nice! Thanks for the tip, Kusaragi! I think it looks great too ^_^ as soon as I get it... sweatdrop  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

It's still really confusing to me. I def agree with Kusa. You need a green dress or something. Why on the moon?

((I FINALLY GOT THE SKIN!))