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PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:25 am
You're blocking a lot of elements of your avvy. I kind of see a theme, but I'm a matching nazi so all the different colors are not sitting well. Try to take something out?  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:47 am
Pretty.
Definitely a bride-type thing going on.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:28 pm
I love that it's all rainbow and pastel, but it still manages to look decidedly "evil". x3 Must be the eyes. Nice job matching.  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:29 pm
A fellow green avi! Nice job.  

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:04 pm
The sharp greens, off-greens, and yellow-greens create a harsh contrast that isn't easy on the eyes. The only unifying element seems to be a large color-umbrella, and it's cluttered.

Not one of your best works, in my most humbled opinion.  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:47 pm
Nice use of Demonic overtones with a Noir detective feeling. I like the look of the Wings and the Mask you wear. It's straight forward and well organized. I don't think I would change anything.  

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:24 pm
I'm not real big on how the mask interacts with the mane. It makes it look like it's just sort of hovering in front of your face. I'd like to see something that connects a little better.  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:40 pm
The only critique I have is merely an opinion. Ergo, it's just based on my taste.

There's not enough pizzazz or flash to your avatar this time; it's lacking a certain jenesaisquoi.  

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:43 pm
Kals is questing again!

Oh look, a sprightly spring thing, dryad perhaps? I don't think the hair goes very well though, I would try something different.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:45 am
You look like you're down...but nicely done, I love the way the hair interacts with the cloud, and the eyes and the superior form unify it.  

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:54 am
I'm rather unfond of the colours of the dress. Again, it's a personal opinion, but it's one of those items I always find jarring.  
PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:12 am
Wow looks like a dar priest. I like just about everything you have on your avatar. I think you should add an eye modifier. But other then that it's perfect. ^_^

Changed my hair to dark... Wondering if I need something more brown for my suit.  

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:28 am
Nah. It's perfect the way it is. It reminds me of a character in a webcomic though.  
PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:31 pm
Much better than what you had before. Maybe could be a bit cleaner, but it's a huge improvement.

EDIT: Don't mind my gloves. They're part of an RP.  

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:08 pm
Actually the gloves are non-obtrusive. The flowers nearly cover them completely.  
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