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[emmmahy]

WITH the space theme.
It is very cyborg-y. I have no idea what grey weapon thing you used with your avi when it had a zombie's soul item, but if it layers correctly it could work...  

[sth the relinquished]

Ugh. There is negative mesh. Every item clashes with every other item. In a not-flattering way. It looks very slapped-together, and as if you slapped the dress and starmony hair on top of everything else. I'd reccomend losing those, at least.  

[emmmahy]

I can't. I'm a bridesmaid in a forum wedding, and this is my dress. And, in a complicated way I'm not sure I can explain, I have to wear the hair, To match the priest (it's a book themed wedding).

Super-gaian, your back is turned. I can only comment on the way the cape flows and what lovely shoes you have smile and nothing else...well, it's a nice blend from the back.  

[124-C]

Well, do you have to have the other items, then? I'm thinking that if the dress and hair are non-negotiable, then this may be a situation where dropping everything else (starting with the skin and tail) may be the best option...  

[Kusaragi]

I think you look like Renkotsu from Inuyasha. If that was your intent you did a GREAT job capturing the style and equipment.

Even if it's NOT a cosplay you did a great job melding the colors and items. ^_^  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Kusa is my avvy hero...

The only thing slightly bugging me is the face. It seems to clutter itself a lot. Might just be the item though!  

[sth the relinquished]

Very nice. I'm a fan of making very few items work well, and nice choice of hair. Even though I'm pretty sure the color is off, it flows nicely. (being colorblind, I can only be pretty sure). The cape's shoulder is also a tad unblend, but I like the cape, so it's kinda nonnegotiable unless you can cover it with a shawl or something.  

[YunieCookie]

It seems kind of random, but it's quite festive and the items actually do work together nicely (though it works a bit better if you tilt your brain head)
Although it took a second look, I really do like it, it's got a theme, and it's very festive.
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[Kusaragi]

Nice Easter Theme going. just in time for the Holiday

I ended up buying different hair to match this outfit better and to free up my second Adimentia. I replaced the Belt+Dancer bottom Combo with the single different underwear.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Much much better. Flows a lot better and not so cluttered.  

[Kusaragi]

Elegant and natural. I like the mix of green and pink. I don't think I would add anything to this. Well done.

I added the tesla charge.  

[Miss-dark8607]

WOW not it's cooler than before. I like the change as it gives it a halo like effect. (Not not Halo the game derp do derp) I really like how you made it all come together.  

[Kusaragi]

I love the use of purple as a theme. Your glasses contrast nicely but don't pull away from the whole. What I am curious about is the Unicorn. Is it really necessary?

I really like how the Tesla Energy moves with the hair. I don't think I would have used this if I bought a different cut. ^_^  

[Elcia]

I don't have any complaints. Spacey, mecha-ish, what's not to like.

(mine looks like I puked easter all over Elci XD)  

[Phaeton]

It really does. That's not a bad thing. I can't see anything in need of a change.