Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Saverio C.]

The way the new items are drawn just seems weird to me.  

[PendragonX9]

well the cape seems a little bland next to the complex patterns of the hammer and armor but you have defiantly captured the feel of a paladin  

[Miss-dark8607]

While simple it's pretty much says bad a**. Though I something goofy could have been added to your other hand to make it even more bad a**.

No my unicorn isn't necessary atm but when I using Rally, Town, or ZOMG it's funny and blends well because the pony moves.  

[Taeryyn]

The skunk around your neck doesn't blend well with the doll ears or those goggles, and the way the bat is held makes it all one big jumble. It's hard to make out what's what.

I would get rid of the bat and the skunk (and the ring pop, unless you add more red touches), or find some way to incorporate them that isn't so smooshed together.

When you're doing a single-coloured outfit, I find it's nice to add layers and give it lots of details. Pay attention to *what* you're wearing. Don't just throw something on because it's purple, pay attention to what it adds to the overall look.  

[Phaeton]

It's uh, quite Rabbity. You don't really need the chicks on the ground though, and the yellow of the stockings is too dull to mesh with the hair and/or the chicks. I wish they'd update those striped stockings though.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

can we say busty bad a**? I would not want to meet you on the street. Flows really nicely. biggrin  

[emmmahy]

Ah so pretty pretty pretty flower elf princess! [I sound like Rina sweatdrop ]
Well, the wedding is over, so I can be whatever I want.  

[Taeryyn]

I quite like the overall look you're going for, but the colours are all over the place. You could try going for a brighter red skirt, or choosing the brown version of the skirt you're wearing and pair it with a brown top.

Or maybe use navy heels to go with the hair.  

[emmmahy]

oooh, I like it. Except for the legs. Never did like that item....
Navy heels, I'll go with that.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

Maybe try simplifying the top around the head a bit. Seems like there is a lot going on and I love the eyes so I would play off of that with the green accents.  

[Taeryyn]

I really have no complaints on this at all. The hair sticks out, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. The colours work, and it's very cute. :3  

[Elcia]

My only complaint is the heels they where just badly made -_-
The avi itself is sickly green and grunny themed, very nice.  

[Kusaragi]

It's like an Easter Explosion of sickly cuteness. I like most of the things you have, but the evil chick seems a little out of place.

I also hate the "CHEEP" that is always backwards. But that's the sites' fault.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Absolutely perfect. I wouldn't change a thing.  

[ranchlamb]

She looks like she just won the Magical Girl Cuteness award. Everything goes well together and its not to busy or to simple. She has a very nice set of Items.