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Sentama Lin

PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:07 am
Oh... That's wonderful~

I'd personally add a held item -- like a Faunzy's Flute or something.  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:44 pm
I didn't notice you had a "normal" face as the hat acts like another head. I pretty much like that effect overall.  

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:07 am
The ears do not seem to work that well with the whole thing.  
PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:08 am
Eh, too settish for me.
And your hair is distractingly different...maybe a helm or something might help.  

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:27 am
Your avi is so white! Maybe add some color? I like it, it's just has too many details and white avi on white screen...meh. Maybe simplify it a bit, adding some color would be nice too but not nesessary.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 1:23 pm
For some weird reson reminds me of lady gaga  

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:16 pm
I have two complaints. The fact that your golden arm doesn't match the other arm and that the wind doesn't match the water.  
PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:20 pm
I like it and I know where you're going with it but it seems busy..maybe try simplifying a bit? might just be my taste though.  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:17 am
I like it, 's pretty. Just wondering about the hair...'s distractingly different than everything else...  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 12:08 pm
I wish there was a bit more order to your color choice, but it's not bad. I really like how the hair interacts with the headband and halo though. The rest of the avi almost seems too simple for the hair. Personally, I'd go for something elegant to match the hair but it's up to you.  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:46 pm
It's simple, it's pleasant. The flaming turtle stands out tremendously but the rest of it works for a basic setup. Piling on layers isn't always the best way to go this is a good example of that.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:35 pm
The umbrella just don't look right and the eyes weird me out  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:11 pm
Reminds me of a Turn Based RPG. I like the way your halo and the sword interact. The colors flow well and I really like that cape just for itself. I don't think I would change anything.

As an aside, this is the first time in MONTHS that I've not worn anything on my head. There is no accessory or item changing my hair or eyes, and funny enough this hairstyle and eye color represent the RL me really well (Except for hair COLOR of course. ^_^ )  
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:06 am
I think, while it does mend well, that the avatar might benefit with a head accessory, though not a hat. It just leaves your head rather bare.  

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:35 pm
Interesting amalgamation. I think it's interesting that you're using two different swords. The colors mesh rather well, but it just seems to be a jumble. I would try to find things that flow better.  
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