Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Large Inmate]

That blue shirt just doesn't work with the dagger thing. Although it does look good with everything else.  

[124-C]

The belly button showing is extremely arousing and liable to cause riots. For public safety purposes you should cover up.

@La Belle - I was lurking in the main forums and thought I would try my hand at something as obnoxious as the main forum-goers... Did it work?  

[Trish the Stalker]

Tsuji, it totally worked if that's what you were going for.

This one, if you had the David thingie to cover the skin colour from showing through it'd be perfect.  

[Red Glacier]

I like it. First brown based avatar i've seen done so well 3nodding  

[Erverain]

It's just too busy.  

[Elcia]

I like it a lot. Very Musketer-ish ^_^ I have to mention that for the first time ever, I like the musketer pants. Since they go over all of gaia's shoes those boots make them look more natural. And Jack's beard is just perfect like that! I like! A++  

[Kire Kaysan]

It's cool now you neeed a necklace.  

[Large Inmate]

I don't like it. The Black seems way to over crowded. It reminds me of a knight without much money throwing on layers to make armor.

Jimmy- That gave me a good laugh. That would be awsome in the game forums too.  

[124-C]

Are those pants missing the crotch? Naughty naughty...

((Jimmy? Where's Jimmy?))  

[Trish the Stalker]

It's so average again Tsuji. Like... any Gaian could have come up with that. Once again, none of the colours tie in particularly well, and it just kind of sits there all blah-like.  

[124-C]

The strap on the bag kinda throws things off and the blond hair softens its appearance too much.  

[Large Inmate]

I don't like how the brown and the red clash. They're to similar but yet reallt diferent.

Sorry Tsuji I keep on getting you two mixed up with the new names.. and nope, I think it's something that's hanging on the pants... that's so much better. surprised  

[Phaeton]

The gift of the Goddess stands out way to much in opposition with the rest of the setup.  

[124-C]

I was going to say that it has far too simple a composition (something that my own avatars have been suffering from, as of late), but now I see the gold accents and the red eyes!

So, I'll have to fall onto plan B for critiquing: The red dot on your forehead looks retarded.

@Inmate: I thought maybe it was the hat. Don't worry about it, I actually thought it was funny. biggrin  

[Arcanas]

It kind of reminds me of a ship's captain, but why the katana? I mean...I can understand if said captain got lost and picked one up...