The Writing Thread

[Slim95]

"There’s nothing left but corruption in the world"

This is the only line that seemed iffy to me. The rest flowed nicely, but it's hard to judge without the tune that goes with it. 3nodding  

[Bassios]

^__^

As soon as I write a tune, I'll post it!

Also, What about changing that line for

"We're all heading down
a long and lonely road..."

 

[Slim95]

bass20xx

^__^

As soon as I write a tune, I'll post it!

Also, What about changing that line for

"We're all heading down
a long and lonely road..."

Chee! I look forward to it. whee heart

That sounds much better. Methinks you should keep it.  

[Indigo Project]

Puck and her boy poked their heads in through the door. He looked left, she looked right, they each looked up and down, then at each other.

"All clear," they whispered in agreement.

They snuck across the white tile floor, Puck's toenails clicking softly as she went. The house was dark, but for the blue glow of the computer at one end of the room. They moved into the kitchen.

"Boost me up," Puck comanded. Her boy did so and she climbed onto the counter. She passed a box of knives and a cookie jar, trying to decide with which one she could have more fun.  

[Sanzoskitsune]

O_O Indy are you writing little snippets of a story?  

[Indigo Project]

Sanzoskitsune

O_O Indy are you writing little snippets of a story?

Yeah, when I feel like it.  

[Sanzoskitsune]

gonk now you got me curious! darn you!  

[Indigo Project]

This will really kill you: I only post one snippit per page. wink  

[Sanzoskitsune]

....I hate you, at least I wrote a short, if very short, story  

[Indigo Project]

So am I! I'm just breaking it up and posting as I go along.  

[Sanzoskitsune]

I beat you with bat *beats with bat*  

[Indigo Project]

Sanzoskitsune

I beat you with bat *beats with bat*

gonk I can't write when you do that!  

[Sanzoskitsune]

...we can work around that  

[Indigo Project]

You know, you could just keep replying to me until the next page starts. Then I'll have to write the next part.  

[Sanzoskitsune]

stop figuring out my plan! scream