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Mr Jes

PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:37 am
*Is weirded out too* eek

Interesing, is all I can say. Not sure what the exact theme is. ^^'  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:56 pm
it's simple, clean, well put together and easily shows a very Samurai based theme. the entire thing to me comes off as a Rōnin theme  

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:51 pm
It's nice. All the colours go well together without it looking contrived. I don't really have any suggestions. I would be inclined perhaps to try and work some sort of head item into it, but it really is balanced just fine the way it is now.  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:53 pm
It's very blue, Tae. Nice blending of the colors, though the wig is a bit... poofy.  

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:05 am
A warrior on a tiger. That's pretty awesome.
Everything works well together, and I really like the layering of the mask and the helmet/thing.
Only thing I can think of, is to maybe have a dark sword instead of the white and gold one? It just seems to stand out compared to the darker rest of the avatar.  
PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:19 am
Nice nature-fairy theme you got going, Yunie. The only thing I'd recommend to take out the "bird on the stick" accessory. It only takes the theme so far. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:39 pm
I still love it The hair really matches your samurai theme.  
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:43 pm
Very nice, though I feel the held items (or at least the bird thing you're holding) interrupt the flow a bit.  

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 6:52 am
Verra nize...de onlie ting iz hyu need more green like on da skirt/

Btw hy'm cosplayink dis guy.  
PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:26 am
It doesn't really work south of the shirt.  

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:42 pm
You know if there was some sort of glowing yellow item for behind you the look would be complete.  
PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:38 am
First- Lovely dress
Second- Halo wrks well with your complexion an the dress.
Third- Lose the helm....just doesnt meld right  

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Mr Jes

PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:52 pm
Nice avi, overall. The only thing I suggest is losing the flames and either remove the Angle Bow or equip it to the back. 3nodding  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:57 am
Jes hasn't changed their avatar so I don't really have anything else to critique about it... but... I GOT A NEW PET ^_^ It was gifted to me.  

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Phaeton

PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:17 am
It's pretty neat. The bits of purple are subtle and blend into the rest of the colors. It builds a nice character appearance. Great stuff.

I can only suggest maybe a nice wooden staff to carry. It isn't necessary though.  
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