Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[emmmahy]

It's pretty cute but too simple for my tastes.
Just not my cup of tea.

I can only suggest...hm...the wench chicnch in red, I don't really know how that will work out...
Not necessary in the slightlest by the way.  

[Kusaragi]

Interesting combination of colors. I think that you either need more brown or toss it out completely. I do like the hat but it blends in with the dragon. What kind of theme were you going for? If you don't mind me asking.  

[Taeryyn]

The grey headdress and armlets sort of fades into the pale skin. It's a nice change, light skin with the warmer coloured tail and wings, but the contract might be more evident with different accessories. :3  

[emmmahy]

Kusaragi

Interesting combination of colors. I think that you either need more brown or toss it out completely. I do like the hat but it blends in with the dragon. What kind of theme were you going for? If you don't mind me asking.

Theme? Uhh...random-badass FTW? XD

@Tae: DUDE. WIN. Srsly, love the blues and the rainbowy skin.  

[nedozuki_88]

I honestly think you need more orange thrown in there...unless it turns too halloweenie...than scratch that idea ^^;  

[emmmahy]

"Give a man a fire and he's warm for the day. But set fire to him and he's warm for the rest of his life."
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Woah, random as hell.

All I'm gonna say.

I'mma Scarecrow! >

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Terry Pratchett.

 

[YunieCookie]

I think it's a really good scarecrow avi :3
Everything works really well with the theme, and I think the crow on your shoulder is a nice touch >w<  

[Erverain]

I have no idea what you're supposed to be, but you've mixed colors well, and the balance is just great. Simplicity is best, after all.  

[Elcia]

Doesn't the Chocobo look better standing up? Either way, it's a very well put together avi, no complaints.  

[Taeryyn]

I'm assuming the avatar is supposed to be more about a character you're portraying rather than being matchy-matchy or colour-coordinated, so I'm basing my critique on that. ^_^

It's very busy, and it's a bit hard to distinguish the actual avatar itself from the background and companion items. That being said, you immediately get a sense of what's going on (looks like some sorceress in the process of casting a complicated spell, or something to that effect), so it effectively communicates the story really well. smile Well done!  

[Phaeton]

It's a good mesh of colors (Though I don't particularly like them), It makes a good Lolita on Halloween design though. Not too top-heavy, or external item heavy. It's nice.  

[Erverain]

I see I'm not the only one who wanted to play with the event cape. The hood is a nice touch, though. I was looking for something similar, but didn't have anything that would fit...
Anyway, nice threads as usual Phae. The dagger in the offhand throws it off a tad, though.  

[Elcia]

I would try to get pants that were actually black Erverain. And the pony is out in left field but I assume you had a purpose with that choice. Otherwise it works very nicely.
And of course people are using the cape, it's one of the best event items ever!  

[Erverain]

Very busy. It's like you have no legs :<
And yes, it was intentional, though I lack the proper facial expression. Is going for one of these: stare , but I did not have the funds for the face/expression item.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Very nice, but I'm not too fond of how bright that ice sword is. That's a personal issue though, nothing you need to change.

Also, I absolutely adore how people have been using the event cape~