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 Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:00 pm
dont worry. though like any human, i might act like a demon at times, im not evil...
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:07 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:00 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 8:40 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:55 am
it was a joke...Or Am I? is the name of one of my poems...lol
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:06 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 7:18 pm
heart i love your work heart . im just wondering where you get inspiration from sweatdrop redface . me im just a noob to poetry crying
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 6:43 pm
hey we are all noobs sometimes.
advice fer monkkk
1.stay away from triple k's in anything
2.dont try and rhyme all the time, there are patterns that require no rhyming at all actually
3.always keep a pad of paper and a pen with u wherever u go(yes, even to the loo)
hope these help! 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:27 am
thanks the k's dont mean anything its just that monk and monkk were taken
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:09 am
where do i get my inspiration from?? to tell the truth my inspiration is pretty much my life....if you have ever had some of the experiences that i have then you would know exactly what the poems mean... and where they come from. and like arcane said your poems dont ahve to rhyme ALL the time.... truthfully.. when my poems rhyme i dont really mean for them too..... and also like he said keep a pad of paper and a pen or pencil with you
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:57 pm
These are very good! 3nodding
If you don't mind... could you look at a couple of my poems? My topic is "Poetry... Sweet and Simple". I'd really appreciate some input. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:15 pm
SQUEE!!!! thanks!!! yours are pretty good too
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 4:05 pm
And thank you for taking the time to read them! whee
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 6:34 pm
No problem hun!! l love readong new poems.. and dont worry i wont take any... Im not like that
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 4:49 pm
sweatdrop i just wasnt sure if the triple k's were there cuz...well...u know sweatdrop
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