Sakura's Poetry Contest!

[Sakura-Kyoukan]

x.Sari.x

Thats just awesome! i give a 10!

 

[Darthspanky]

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[Darthspanky]

this one has no name...

love to me has been an endless turn of depression.

i will feel for one, but her heart is to another.

i miss the sweet tender touch of a kiss across my lips.

the warmth of the knowlage that you are needed by another.

the joyful smile of happyness, that comes from nothing more then pure glee that comes from a single thought.


but still, i sit here.



alone.



without compony of another.

no matter how much i try , love seems to evade me.

i wish upon myself to gain the togetherness i need to survive.




i end this, with only a thought in someones mind.  

[wolfdidditz]

i see light no more
it has now faded away
dark i have become  

[Sahkri]

Poem #1
Darkness falls behind my back
But light prevents its attack
I may be scared for life
But your words dull the knife
I'll love you like no other
Dear mother.

Poem #2
One by one
You'll all be done
You think i'm lying
But you won't be laughing
When you're dying.  

[Ginmei]

roses are red violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are u


roses are red violets are blue god made me beutiful but wat the ******** happened to u

dont take this as an offensive thing im just saying something i just made up mrgreen  

[demonicguardian2]

wow some of these poems r good  

[SakuraMist]

Poem#1 :
:Untimely Death:
An Untimely Death Upon My Chest all i do is sit in death
Cold and lonely no one hears ma call for help
as i dwell in the darkness soo wondering when the light will ever show
ive come to relieze that i do not live no more that im waiting for my untimely death. ehh lol i think its ok xp  

[Ketake]

Okay I'm not so very good but I'll post anyways
Just so you know English is not my first language, so if you see any spelling/grammar errors or something that just doesn't make sense, let me know
Anorexia (scared)

and he is silently whispering that he loves her
but she cant believe him
because he never touches her anymore

he is afraid she will break
even though he wants her

and she hears him crying at night
when he drags his fingers along her back
where the angel wings soon will be

He has to see her disappearing

and he looks terrified
when he have been in the bathroom after her
and he sees how much hair she has lost

he is the silent witness to her decay

and his pleading eyes says it all
about sorrow
when they sit around the kitchen table

he has to watch the one he loves the most commit a slow suicide

Dear Ana
she gave you her body
and her life
and her agony
please don't take him away from her

And


8th grade(A completely normal class

At the back sits a girl with dark hair
She stares out the window and thinks about
How she will ship the next meal
While the teacher talks about
Verbs and adverbs
her body is shaking
It doesn't wants to be her
Miranda what are you dreaming about now?
You have to pay attention, this is important
How will you ever pas the exams?
She spends all her time being
What the ideal society calls
An anorexic brat

In the middle sits Tina
Did my make up smudge when I cried?
Looks at the black board
Doesn't it show that I'm perfect?
Comments on a friends mistake
Tina what's the difference between a verb and a adverb?
Don't ask her that
Ask her what agony, complex and cutting is
The whole ideal society closes their eyes now

A the front sits Erik, he's sweating
What if the math test didn't go well, maybe I answered wrong at question 4, what's going to happen then
Takes notes of everything the teacher says
Everybody should do like Erik and take notes
You will learn much faster then
Answers all the questions
Just think about it, what if everybody was like Erik!
Miranda! Can you repeat what he just said?
Help me quick, I'm wrong wrong wrong!
Because in his brain the pictures comes up
The punishments and suffering if he fails
It's hot in the classroom but he wears a thick sweater
Never ever am I going to let anyone see the bruises my dad gave me
He's what the ideal society
calls a perfectly care less child

Alone at her bench sits Hanna
Her terrified eyes looks round the classroom
Am I doing anything they can say something about?
Giggles and discreet words comes from behind
You ******** b***h your kind shouldn't be allowed to live
And you are so stupid
Gollum! Ha-ha, you are so damn ugly!
have to get out of here
How will she cope with sitting here
another 15 minutes and listing to the truth
The laughter doesn't mind her
It's all the looks that hurt
have to get out, have to get out
But
Hanna! Go back to your place right now
don't be stupid, where did you think you should go?
Sit down and do your work
but..
NOW!

8th grade. a completely normal class, a completely normal day  

[Sakura-Kyoukan]

The mental blade cut thru flesh and bone,
thou my minds at peace the worlds out of order
(samurai champloo -watch it on AS tonight)

jack black played hacky sac while mac attacked jacks cadillac
joe and his hoe just said "oh no" while the snow fell ever so slow
well fred he instead just went out of his head and there he lies dead in my bed
why did he die, well i cannot tell a lie, he ate all my pie so I... well.. look at him sheesh.  

[Sakura-Kyoukan]

NeonKitty

to much stuff to read... @.@

yea i agree some friggin long a** poems out there, Just a word to the wise if your poem is longer than a couple paragraphs it's prob not going to qualify for Front Page.  

[missy_nice]

haaaj