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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:21 am
x.Sari.x Thats just awesome! i give a 10!
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:49 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:52 am
this one has no name...
love to me has been an endless turn of depression.
i will feel for one, but her heart is to another.
i miss the sweet tender touch of a kiss across my lips.
the warmth of the knowlage that you are needed by another.
the joyful smile of happyness, that comes from nothing more then pure glee that comes from a single thought.
but still, i sit here.
alone.
without compony of another.
no matter how much i try , love seems to evade me.
i wish upon myself to gain the togetherness i need to survive.
i end this, with only a thought in someones mind.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 8:05 am
i see light no more it has now faded away dark i have become
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 8:17 am
Poem #1 Darkness falls behind my back But light prevents its attack I may be scared for life But your words dull the knife I'll love you like no other Dear mother.
Poem #2 One by one You'll all be done You think i'm lying But you won't be laughing When you're dying.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:16 am
roses are red violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are u
roses are red violets are blue god made me beutiful but wat the ******** happened to u
dont take this as an offensive thing im just saying something i just made up mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:28 pm
wow some of these poems r good
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:38 am
Poem#1 : :Untimely Death: An Untimely Death Upon My Chest all i do is sit in death Cold and lonely no one hears ma call for help as i dwell in the darkness soo wondering when the light will ever show ive come to relieze that i do not live no more that im waiting for my untimely death. ehh lol i think its ok xp
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:53 am
Okay I'm not so very good but I'll post anyways Just so you know English is not my first language, so if you see any spelling/grammar errors or something that just doesn't make sense, let me know Anorexia (scared)
and he is silently whispering that he loves her but she cant believe him because he never touches her anymore
he is afraid she will break even though he wants her
and she hears him crying at night when he drags his fingers along her back where the angel wings soon will be
He has to see her disappearing
and he looks terrified when he have been in the bathroom after her and he sees how much hair she has lost
he is the silent witness to her decay
and his pleading eyes says it all about sorrow when they sit around the kitchen table
he has to watch the one he loves the most commit a slow suicide
Dear Ana she gave you her body and her life and her agony please don't take him away from her
And
8th grade(A completely normal class
At the back sits a girl with dark hair She stares out the window and thinks about How she will ship the next meal While the teacher talks about Verbs and adverbs her body is shaking It doesn't wants to be her Miranda what are you dreaming about now? You have to pay attention, this is important How will you ever pas the exams? She spends all her time being What the ideal society calls An anorexic brat
In the middle sits Tina Did my make up smudge when I cried? Looks at the black board Doesn't it show that I'm perfect? Comments on a friends mistake Tina what's the difference between a verb and a adverb? Don't ask her that Ask her what agony, complex and cutting is The whole ideal society closes their eyes now
A the front sits Erik, he's sweating What if the math test didn't go well, maybe I answered wrong at question 4, what's going to happen then Takes notes of everything the teacher says Everybody should do like Erik and take notes You will learn much faster then Answers all the questions Just think about it, what if everybody was like Erik! Miranda! Can you repeat what he just said? Help me quick, I'm wrong wrong wrong! Because in his brain the pictures comes up The punishments and suffering if he fails It's hot in the classroom but he wears a thick sweater Never ever am I going to let anyone see the bruises my dad gave me He's what the ideal society calls a perfectly care less child
Alone at her bench sits Hanna Her terrified eyes looks round the classroom Am I doing anything they can say something about? Giggles and discreet words comes from behind You ******** b***h your kind shouldn't be allowed to live And you are so stupid Gollum! Ha-ha, you are so damn ugly! have to get out of here How will she cope with sitting here another 15 minutes and listing to the truth The laughter doesn't mind her It's all the looks that hurt have to get out, have to get out But Hanna! Go back to your place right now don't be stupid, where did you think you should go? Sit down and do your work but.. NOW!
8th grade. a completely normal class, a completely normal day
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 12:04 pm
The mental blade cut thru flesh and bone, thou my minds at peace the worlds out of order (samurai champloo -watch it on AS tonight)
jack black played hacky sac while mac attacked jacks cadillac joe and his hoe just said "oh no" while the snow fell ever so slow well fred he instead just went out of his head and there he lies dead in my bed why did he die, well i cannot tell a lie, he ate all my pie so I... well.. look at him sheesh.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:16 am
Ginmei roses are red violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are u roses are red violets are blue god made me beutiful but wat the ******** happened to u dont take this as an offensive thing im just saying something i just made up mrgreen eek rofl rofl rofl rofl omfg 10
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:17 am
to much stuff to read... @.@
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:21 am
NeonKitty to much stuff to read... @.@ yea i agree some friggin long a** poems out there, Just a word to the wise if your poem is longer than a couple paragraphs it's prob not going to qualify for Front Page.
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:52 am
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