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 Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:25 pm
Damn cliffhangers. mad
I want more. Can't wait to see Bishop and AP, Shadow, and MCG.
Great job Jimbo.
I was so....nice in the story.
Waky usually the nice one.
Ally and Shram's personalities fit them.
p.s I'm glad you used the purple me....I wouldn't want to be a nancy-boy wearing pink in the story.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:28 pm
True Arrogance Damn cliffhangers. mad
I want more. Can't wait to see Bishop and AP, Shadow, and MCG.
Great job Jimbo.
I was so....nice in the story.
Waky usually the nice one.
Ally and Shram's personalities fit them.
p.s I'm glad you used the purple me....I wouldn't want to be a nancy-boy wearing pink in the story.
I think you wearing pink now has to be somewhere in the story. Most definitly.
And yes, I think that would work MrJimmy.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:40 pm
wakusei True Arrogance Damn cliffhangers. mad
I want more. Can't wait to see Bishop and AP, Shadow, and MCG.
Great job Jimbo.
I was so....nice in the story.
Waky usually the nice one.
Ally and Shram's personalities fit them.
p.s I'm glad you used the purple me....I wouldn't want to be a nancy-boy wearing pink in the story.
I think you wearing pink now has to be somewhere in the story. Most definitly.
And yes, I think that would work MrJimmy.
Well, in the story, I hope I get caught off gaurd while gardening or something and I was wearing this. I wouldn't be able to take myself seriously any other way.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:43 pm
True Arrogance wakusei True Arrogance Damn cliffhangers. mad
I want more. Can't wait to see Bishop and AP, Shadow, and MCG.
Great job Jimbo.
I was so....nice in the story.
Waky usually the nice one.
Ally and Shram's personalities fit them.
p.s I'm glad you used the purple me....I wouldn't want to be a nancy-boy wearing pink in the story.
I think you wearing pink now has to be somewhere in the story. Most definitly.
And yes, I think that would work MrJimmy.
Well, in the story, I hope I get caught off gaurd while gardening or something and I was wearing this. I wouldn't be able to take myself seriously any other way. Okay I'll go and rewrite you guy's parts now, I'll have it up in just a while.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:55 pm
I didn't have to rewrite much, the swich worked suprisingly seamlessly. But it's up, I also added the final paragraph which somehow slipped through my fingers when I was CPing it.
I believe it reads better now, sorry about the mixup Waku and TA.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 8:05 pm
Right im gonna go to bed however i wish to write that this was an excellent storry allthough i have no idea what personality trait thou hast given me.
i hope to see more later smile
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 8:29 pm
shram Right im gonna go to bed however i wish to write that this was an excellent storry allthough i have no idea what personality trait thou hast given me.
i hope to see more later smile Yeah, you me and Ala really don't have much personality at this point. I'll post more soon!
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 8:30 pm
Cute ^_^. I haven't writen anything in ages.... I have writers block with my story. I seem to do that. I'll get into writing it... then BAM I loose it. Something is bound to hit me again though.
Can't wait to hear... er read more!
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 8:56 pm
God-Raped-Me Cute ^_^. I haven't writen anything in ages.... I have writers block with my story. I seem to do that. I'll get into writing it... then BAM I loose it. Something is bound to hit me again though. Can't wait to hear... er read more! Thanks a bunch! I can't wait to add your charactor in... she's gonna be... intresting to write.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:00 pm
MrJimmy God-Raped-Me Cute ^_^. I haven't writen anything in ages.... I have writers block with my story. I seem to do that. I'll get into writing it... then BAM I loose it. Something is bound to hit me again though. Can't wait to hear... er read more! Thanks a bunch! I can't wait to add your charactor in... she's gonna be... intresting to write. WHOOT!!! I'M INTRESTING! Really though... I don't even know how to write me... good luck! 4laugh
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:26 pm
God-Raped-Me MrJimmy God-Raped-Me Cute ^_^. I haven't writen anything in ages.... I have writers block with my story. I seem to do that. I'll get into writing it... then BAM I loose it. Something is bound to hit me again though. Can't wait to hear... er read more! Thanks a bunch! I can't wait to add your charactor in... she's gonna be... intresting to write. WHOOT!!! I'M INTRESTING! Really though... I don't even know how to write me... good luck! 4laugh I'm gonna need it.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:34 pm
Nice switchin'! There's one he-to-she that needs fixin', though... whee
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:45 pm
wakusei Nice switchin'! There's one he-to-she that needs fixin', though... whee I R MISSED IT?
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 9:48 pm
Fixed it in my version, it'll show up in the repost.
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 10:43 pm
MrJimmy Antun I like it. Makes me wish I hadnt stopped posting so often...I havent been much more than a lurker for the past month. sweatdrop Uhh... that has something to do with this Im sure. Don't worry Antun, I havn't forgotten you. Like I said I'm going to work everybody in, I just need to find a basis for some of the charactors first. It's just that everyne I write has to have a purpose, or a quirk, in my opinion the only charactor that is allowed to be flat in my stories is the narrator. So it's hard for me to write a meanigful part for each of you, but I'll get it done! crying Raine Eoviny Whee! Very entertaining. Write more... I want MORE No prob. I cant think of one good reason why you wouldnt have forgotten me. I really stopped posting right around when you joined. I mean, this is the only place on gaia I still lurk around, but I havent been posting, so no reason you would have remembered.
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