Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[aretoo]

You're looking quite sharp, Erve; you have a pleasant combination of colors, with the sunburst setting everything off quite nicely, and the beard adding just the right touch.  

[Kire Kaysan]

I always have to admire you skills in making an awesome avi and combinations. Your avi are always or usually awesome Aretoo.  

[Erverain]

I dunno, I don't think the sword goes very well with that particular style...  

[pickle relish]

It matches very well. Kudos. ^^  

[WiskersThCatfish]

It quite reminds me of a bar-wench, but from the future instead of the past. Feel me?

Can't be dying...  

[Saverio C.]

EVERYONE LOVES EXPLOSIONS! ACTION MOVIE JIMMY IS AWESOME  

[pickle relish]

Look! Saverio's a knight in shining armor.
Weird, isn't it?  

[Large Inmate]

... You are supposed the critique the avatar above you and give at least one thing you don't like. Not what you like.

The pants don't really go with it. They look to grubby while the rest looks more elegent.  

[Saverio C.]

I was poking fun at how silly jimmy looks.

Flaming hair is too bright  

[Phaeton]

Full Plate doesn't fit too well with that cape. Something more regal would do better. and uh... lose those sunglasses.  

[Saverio C.]

Same to you little missy.  

[Erverain]

Seriously, Phaeton, the glasses are practically a trademark of Sav.
But ditch the wings. Then you won't be an obvious flamer. At least, not visually obvious.  

[CR Kyrie]

The blue jeans don't go well with the red top.  

[Sentama Lin]

I really recommend, as I've said, something to cover your arms that is black and/or white, like the Blade Top. From how I understand it it should correctly stack well with the items you have. Otherwise it's a great avatar.

My current avatar is... well... I feel it's lacking a "Bam" factor, if one knows what I'm talking about. Do you all agree?  

[Chemmon]

i think i said this in another game, but the sword is a little out of place
the color does match though wink
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