Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Arcanas]

I dunno, the fact that it's far to simplistic, and lacks anything that makes it jump really gets to me, I mean that, and I really don't like that stupid dragon. If you like it, then that's all that matters, just my opinion.  

[124-C]

The wing makes it feel heavy and off-balanced. The worst part is that I can't think of a good fix for it... If there were an item that filled the bottom-left you'd be set...

Shika will eventually build up enough of an inventory to properly accessorize. Near as I can tell he's only been on Gaia for 32 days, so he's doing better than average.  

[Sentama Lin]

While I enjoy the colour scheming, I feel that the outfit would do better without the Shadow Spirit. It does match, that it does, but it feels unnecessary.

Also, I've always wondered. What type of death would ensue if one didn't critique? The standard death, the medieval connotation of death, or what?  

[124-C]

Sentama Lin

... the medieval connotation of death, or what?

I ******** love that avatar, Lin! It's perfect! Don't change a thing! biggrin

You don't like my Shadow Spirit? sad He's one of my killing buddies...  

[Sentama Lin]

If you say so, Tsuj, though I feel it's lacking a certain Bam factor still.

Well... now with rationale for your choice, the Shadow Spirit does work. After all if he's part of your killing group, why exclude him?  

[124-C]

Since it seems that my idea didn't work, I'll go ahead and critique: You're right, it lacks badaboom, but the biggest problem is the glow stick thing, it doesn't fit with the rest of the avatar.

The real reason that Loki is in my avatar is because without him there's too much red on the right. Seriously, TekTek it and tell me I'm wrong.  

[Arcanas]

You do have a point there, Tsuji, the fact that the Chiaykou scarf billows so much at the one point gives you far too much red on the one side.  

[Large Inmate]

Hmm.. The mask just seems off. It doesn't draw your eye to it and it doesn't go with the theme.  

[Niada]

Little bit 'top heavy.' Try evening the balance with something black on your legs ...  

[PendragonX9]

i like but i guess it would be better with some kind of gold armor  

[CR Kyrie]

It's kind of confusing. There's a lot on your avatar and it's hard to focus.

About Sentama Lin and the last critique of my avatar, I've tried the Blade Top, and I don't like how it looks. It's even more awkward than it is without. I agree with you that something needs to be there, but it's better this way than with anything else I've seen.  

[Kusaragi]

Very "Mythic" I like the leggings you have they set off the shoe/bracers you have on, and it's not TOO overboard. well done.  

[PendragonX9]

i like...good color coding  

[the pantsless snake]

PendragonX9000

i like...good color coding

The visor thing  

[Kusaragi]

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PendragonX9000

i like...good color coding

The visor thing

( I think you wanted this in another thread. ^_^)*Watches the closet nerd die* :Shock: NO don't die on us!

*tries to preform CPR, and the pixie helps revive him*

Wow cute and functional. Your avatar has a nice collection of high end items and they are well placed and don't crowd. However they don't really have a theme to them other then the monthly items. They look good and are defiantly unique, but if you put your mind to it I bet you could get an avatar that has a little more interaction. ^_^