This is thanks to my boredom and mild OCD. :3 I started to point out the mistakes she made, but gave up partway through. Spelling errors are circled in red. Awkward wording is underlind in a red wavy line. Green is punctuation. Blue wavy underline means it's a fragment, or otherwise needs to be re-writted. Then I just gave up because no force on heaven or earth could save this article.
Thank you Kerri for clearing that up...... I.... I am at an utter loss for words with this idiot girl. O.o FIrstly I am horridly offend at the impression that a manicure and a shopping spree is the only mark of woman hood, no all a woman is worth. The woman's rights movement, thousands of years of goddess worship, and thousands of years of reverence for the miracle of life and the biological genius that is the woman's body is utterly lost on this imbecile.
biggrin I could rant on and on and on, But for the sake all things good in the world I hope not too many people think this way.