Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Mugen Nagrom]

Oh go for a red gunner jacket, kickass!  

[PendragonX9]

it doesn't work and i meant more as an accent then a full change  

[Arcanas]

Well, since I was going to say too much black/gray, I might as well toss out a suggestion as well.

maybe change the gloves, or hmm...if you can afford it, start investing in the mithril armor .  

[PendragonX9]

i have  

[Arcanas]

well, it definitely adds a nice shiny contrast  

[Sentama Lin]

Only thing that really bothers me is the cool-coloured boots with the warm-coloured armor. Other than that, it's good.  

[PendragonX9]

it's very woodsman  

[Arcanas]

I think I'd put the damascus armor you're wearing to have the red accents, would make for a cool effect I think.  

[PendragonX9]

well I've never liked the whole one wing thing  

[Sentama Lin]

The gold and light blues are strange to see on an avatar that used to be so black. It's refreshing, though I can't say I like the Seraphim Guard on the back.

*went here because people wouldn't tell him what was bothersome about this avi*  

[PendragonX9]

our sidekick is to tall and doesn't fit with the rest of your avi
what pose would you suggest?  

[Magical Maiden]

WTF AT THE RANDOM GOLD AND WINGS.
*cough* I mean, the new items seriously stands out.  

[Sentama Lin]

It's not a fault of yours, but the blond hair has always been very iffy in my eyes on Gaia... :/  

[Arcanas]

I think it's the tree Linny...It's just...I dunno, a bit much  

[Kusaragi]

I really like the interaction of the MC wings, and the company of the Bead Kitsune really set it off nicely. I would suggest using a different sword, but I'm not sure which. xd