Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[PendragonX9]

it's very...dark...i like it  

[umi505]

Well, I like how you finally added something to the black...but it still seems like it needs something to set it off...a little more "umf". It still seems a tad bland.  

[Mugen Nagrom]

The halo almost seems out of place...besides that it is not bad if you were going for an overly fairy look.  

[PendragonX9]

i like it though the shoes kinda stand out  

[Arcanas]

umm...needs a weapon (because I can't think of anything better to say)  

[Kusaragi]

^ I just noticed the Cig, it's great that there are multiple layers that hide away.

^^ DOES have a weapon, he has the Assassin Guise Katar-thing.  

[x- OhhKat]

yes. i do have a weapon too and well the dark is very techinical. so watch out there. keep your weapon by your side smile  

[Sentama Lin]

I don't like it, mainly because I don't see any form of thematic or colour material keeping it together. Perhaps if there was some more colour coordination, or if it looked like more-harmonious randomness (I hope that makes sense) I think it would look okay.

Heh... Colour advice from the colour-deficient one... ^_^;  

[Arcanas]

I guess Kusa, but I don't think the Katar really counts...but that's just me

Anyway, that flute still irks the hell outta me Linny...when are you going to catch them all?  

[Sentama Lin]

Assuming I win 9 times in a row... that will be the first item. Then I want to win it again because it's currently worth about 1 mill last time I checked. I'll make an avatar that matches it in a few seconds.

Ark, can't really say much save your hair, but I know you do not touch the hair at all.  

[Arcanas]

That's interesting to know Linny...I might invest in one of those flutes...but then again, the fact that I have to wait a day, and then actually win...well, I just don't have the luck with that.

I'd lose the cig...makes your avi seem a smidge hypocritical, considering it's all foresty and stuff.  

[PendragonX9]

idk about the new MC (the holy something) but otherwise i like it  

[Arcanas]

PendragonX9000

idk about the new MC (the holy something) but otherwise i like it

We all know my opinion, but the new MC actually works out with how my RPC Arcanas is set up in armor anyway, the sword arm is fairly lightly armored, and the off-hand is armored because Arc also likes to two-hand, and doesn't like using shields. I also like the layer effect I got with the wing on my gauntlet and the holy style wing.  

[PendragonX9]

Arcanas

PendragonX9000

idk about the new MC (the holy something) but otherwise i like it

We all know my opinion, but the new MC actually works out with how my RPC Arcanas is set up in armor anyway, the sword arm is fairly lightly armored, and the off-hand is armored because Arc also likes to two-hand, and doesn't like using shields. I also like the layer effect I got with the wing on my gauntlet and the holy style wing.

ok well that makes sense but what do you think of mine?  

[Arcanas]

The gold accents are in the right places, and your avi doesn't look like a black blob