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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 1:45 pm
I am usually a free-form poet, but I wanted to try something new. So I wrote this sonnet. I hope you like it... The Rhythm of all that Flows
The trembling bass line comes crreping in- In comes the bass drum, then after the snare- The beat takes you away, with no need for reason- Both moving in unison, one rhythm they share. Then comes the guitar, entering without a mistake- With riffss so powerful, it grabs your soul- You lose stability over every move you make- Just let it take you, just lose control. While hearing the guitar, drums, and bass, too- Everything else in this world disappears- All you have is the music inside you- not even your worst and uttermost fears. If you ask everyone, they all will know- Music is the rhythm of all that flows.
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:23 pm
okay well here it goes...hope you like it
Waiting for the End of Beginning
Alone she stands frozen, partially submerged in the dark and murky depths. Her head dips to peer beneath the icy surface, and through the glass she sees magnified a foreign world, so unlike her own. She looks deeper still, and patiently, she waits, as the currents flow gently by, carrying her essence to the rivers end.
-angelfire4 (originally written by me 10/17/05 but modified 01/28/06 for this event)
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:17 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 7:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:49 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 9:52 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:58 am
Senoch Well, I don't know if there's a limit to how many we can submit. But here's one to go with the Valentine's Spirit of things. (Well, I try anyway) nope no limit gogogo!
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:09 am
i added a couple of noted mentions, keep up the good work!
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Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2006 8:31 pm
"i am the wolf"
i feel like i am not apretiated, not respected. i feel like ppl fear to go near me, and in that fear they mock me. i feel as if the moon is my only true friend,and the only one i can trust w/ my secrets. i feel as if the moon is there just to listen to my sorrows, and its light shines to cheer me up. i am the wolf. i stare at the moon in saddness and sorrow, i stare at that moon in hope and wonder if somday thet that moon will talk back and tell me the wounderous things it sees on "the other side". then maby that will make tears stop and smuther the saddness out of the song i howl to it at night. i am wolf. its the ppl i blame for all the shame, and they kill me time and time again with the words as sharp as bullets of silver. its the ppl that make me sound so bad. its the ppl that kill for reasons unknown. i am the wolf
"reach if you can"
reach for the heavens, reach for your soul, reach for the hand of your angel. reach for your wings angel... ...from your gardian angel- reach, angel, for those wings you can never have wings you can never have on earth because earth can be hell
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Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2006 11:29 pm
i kinda won 9k with this sonnet in another contest lols Category: Sonnet Author: _Ja meh Dedication: Inspired by two songs. Title: Untitled
The very first time that you caught my eye I knew that never again would I cry. Every night when we watch the sun set I look over at you, then I forget Everything that means something, aside The fact that you are right here by my side.
The money, the fame, the love and respect Is nothing to me, if me you neglect.
I know it hasn't been easy for you To live in the light the way that I do. Rumours and lies try to break us apart But our bond is too strong; we are one heart. One love for one life: you are my one love. Even after death I'll watch from above.
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 3:59 pm
underneath your bed they lurk, searching for a victim, until you scream the magic won't work, and you're safe in your head.
they look for way to scare you, and chase you out of bed, and if running is something you do, they do the unthinkable
for the children are swallowed one by one, until they are but skeletons, and indeed the monsters do have fun, and suck you blood 'till you're dead
but fear not, my child, and sleep, for the night is approaching, and if your dreams make your soul weak, don't look under the bed.
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 4:52 pm
Six Little Demons By Candy Cheairs One little demon sitting on your bed Watching you dream and chewing on your head
Don't close your eyes all that tight The second little demon will scream at you with all his might
The third little demon will tease you awake You will see that he is anything but fake
Creeping up your covers comes the fourth Whispering softly of more monsters to the north
The fifth little demon, the worst of them all Will creep into your nightmares and make you fall
The sixth little demon is who I am I'll let you know you can get rid of them
Once they come into your heart They will slowing work you apart
So move fast and see That with time you can be free
Listen to this and listen very close You will only know the answer if you listen as the wind blows
This story does have an happy end I'll tell if you don't tell your imaginary friend
Don't believe in what you can't see And you will be as save as you can be
let me know what you guys think
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 7:08 pm
Jitenya Haiku 3 Set WindThe wind softly blows Birds swim in a sea of air The clouds are tranquil. BelowThe clouds are tranquil Below a river slowly sings ah Winter has come today IceWinter has come today An avalanche came to erase The traces of man A Haiku is in a set of 5,7,5 you have 5 9 6 in your second one & 6 9 5 in your third
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Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2006 6:00 am
Grunnies, Grunnies, psychotic bunnies, They grab onto your head, Then controll you mind untill your dead!
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