Hey rate my sketch

[Tarff]

I agree with all the critiquing earlier. I like it, though (as said earlier) it'd be better if it was darker. Also, the lips are drawn as if her head was turned more than it actually is. The lips should come together again (like they do on the right). Yeah. Turn your head at the angle hers is and you'll see it. If you turned her so she was facing more right (our left) then those lips would work. Also, I think there should be more of a curve to the end of her nose. And yes, the shading is unrealistic. And you should draw the nostril part of the nose on the visible side (I mean, not the whole nostril obviously, but that part of the nose). It looks kinda strange without it. If you darkened the picture I'm sure these things would be easier to spot. Mostly, I really like the picture. It's cool. rofl I think I'd give it an 8.9 3nodding ; Yep.  

[Kayia Hayashi]

8/10
It's really good except it's not that clear.  

[Kai0080]

I like it! dont know if your aiming for realism or What but I like it I give it a 9  

[NotComingBackXXXXXXXXX]

make it a little bit clearer and thicken the neck a bit, its nice i think, better if colored depending on the drawing's qualities, anyways, its just my opinion, i'll have my drawing tablet someday and soon i'll be uploading pics here, if that happens, feel free to rate them. mrgreen