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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:22 am
Most excellent!! This ia going great Jaft!! I shall post some of my essays soon.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:36 pm
anyastar Nushi: wow. I mean, wow. That is some seriously awesome imagery, and a very interesting concept. For some reason, I especially like this line: Nushi da Xiongmao I am the expulsion of your joy. I guess I feel like it captures the essence of the piece. Thank you!! heart I have an affinity for what I refer to as 'exquisite' words--words that sound rich and entrancing. I find this helps my imagery a great deal.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:53 pm
grandma36 Dudue your poems are really good but that story is fricken cool as hell that's really awesome with the whole perspective thing and i caught that skit was skitzafenia or how ever you spell it so then skit isn't really there he's just in pete's mind right ???? Thankies.......Ma! xd heart Yup, Skit's all in Pete's head. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:01 pm
What's this, a ressurection of sorts?
Nay! Jaft has finally put some new poetry in this thread under his post.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:27 pm
Forgive my weekness, I can't control you, the good and the bad we will have seen it all,
My wing spread but never fly
sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:39 pm
As I can't stay away from a thread involving poetry...
My Projects Post
A God's Pain
The peace of this world clings by a thread, And should one more person bow their head, Give in, give up, quit instead, Then all would be lost, and none gained, And the world would have to begin again, And for a God, that is such a pain.
She Never Knew
She was the girl that nobody could see, Soft-spoken and soft, a beauty was she, She was the angel that nobody would get, And never did she try to catch anyone in her net.
She never knew, behind those faces, Guys hid grushes and girls held rages, She never knew of their envy and like, Of her beauty and wonderful life.
She thought they hated and shunned her, She thought they never would dream, Of being her or knowing her, And for invisible pain she did grieve.
For a simple mistake, she would cut at the maker, And thus everyone began to pity her, For she saw most the mistakes she made, And to her most of the cuts were gave.
And one moonlit fearful night, Her parents caught whiff of her deppressive blight, They tried to talk her out of her hole, But she would only let it all go.
The next day they cleaned out her locker, They wished that they could have stopped her, And as they saw them, the students knew, That she had died... because she never knew.
Why?
I want to know why I feel as though I am lost, Never to be found, forever paying cost, Of the board in which I stay, But never living anyway.
I sit and type as though it helps, Though sitting and typing do little else Then give me an excuse to stay up late, While my mind reciprocates.
I think of pain, And realize that nothing is there But lamentations of the past, And fear of the future Which looms dark before the sunrise.
There sits a piece Of wonderfully crafted metal, Steel, leather A beautiful tool, Of pointed death.
Next to it lays An item less pointed, More deadly, Filled not with poison, But ink.
Despair
If only this blatant hypocrisy would cease. All would be one and one all, All would be great and free, All would be a time of celebration.
But alas, it shall never stop, Because we believe things passed down, Because we believe in the old and tried, Because we are pitiless cowards.
When a valiant spirit discovers a new path, Is it cleared and form into a road of knowledge, Is it cleared and made into a channel for truth? No, it is hidden once more and passed by, forgotten.
Natural selection will weed out those who are valiant, The "wise" will control the world without regard for truth, The "wise" will make our minds run on one circuit, The "wise" will kill us all.
Hopeless
A fire can burn, but has to die out. A river can run if it has way out. A storm pours down but eventually stops. And so the human heart beats.
One person may say the heart changes, But it is always constant in exchanges. It always longs for what it can't have, Until it has the perfect match.
Eventually this heart will stop beating, And out of my mind my soul shall be leaving, So what I do between now and then... Will people ever say to tell it again?
If life is so short, Why are we here?
Are we a mockery, Or simply not worthy?
Are we souls, Worth moving on?
Or mere inventions, Of something too far gone?
A fire can burn and has to die out. A river will run when it has a way out. A storm pours down and eventually stops. And so the human heart beats.
The Wanderer
I miss you, girl, I want you back, I pray each night, And look back.
You were beyond me, I know it's true, It didn't stop me, From loving you.
I look back now, I only see, The way it hurts, Only for me.
Conceited b***h, you broke my heart, You had a reason, though it's hard, To understand how you arrived at such a conclusion, To play with my emotions and love, and cause untold confusion.
I'm moving on and forward, The only place left to go, Though remember when you date some a*****e, I hope he hurts you more.
No Stories
There are no stories told to us, That help us learn the stuff we must, Humans always were so stupid, We learn when we see the broken trust.
We learn from pain, We learn from the word, "No".
We learn from torture of the brain, The pain of what we'll never know.
The Door
Trapped inside by cyanide, Thoughts, they flicker, pass me by, Still outside, kept alive, By a faint light in my mind.
The light comes from a door ajar, Which in my head seems so far, It opens into a world of mars, Torn by it's children, torn apart.
I look at this closing door, As it becomes less and more, My only escape, this closing door, And still it becomes less and more.
My only escape, I may not make, I have a chance I may not take, Out there is a burning hate, But in here is a growing lake.
Water laps at my motionless feet, My final fate I may now meet, Or I could fight, deny defeat, But my chances seem so meek.
The water is now up to my waist, I am still not moving, I still wait, I see now that it is so late, I must act now, make the escape.
The door is mere feet away now, The water is up to my neck now, I may meet my final day now, The door is almost closed now.
I have to swim through the door, It still becomes less and more, It becomes a window, so forever more, I can see the darkness through less and more.
Wake Up
I don't see how you can cut people down and still climb on their backs, It's like hammering wood into the tacks. You never realize how much I care about this pitiful life, And so cut me down in constant strife.
Why is life such a battleground? Is it because we are violent? Is it because we don't know better? Or because we don't care?
How the hell can this world keep turning? Is a greater power just letting us die? Laughing at our pitiful troubles? And taking pleasure in the ordered chaos?
I say stand up, wake up, know all you can, Nobody cares and you can't expect them to, So why hold yourself back from pleasure, When it's so little already?
Angels Will Burn
The angels think they're so mighty, And think the demons are doomed, And while that's all you've ever known, That doesn't mean it's true.
It was such a tragic time, When your god turned his head, I blinked a single scarred eye, And thought about what they said.
The angels will burn in hell, And demons shall rise above, As we recover what we need, You kept it from us: love.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 8:20 pm
i was inspired to pursue this because i felt my heart drag my to the keyboard to write something meaningful...close to me. i guess a lot of times we take love for granted...love isn't something that should be toyed around with like i witness on Gaia all the time. it shouldn't be abused. Love is caring for someone, love is believing the best. Love comes down from God above - THAT'S what love is. love sings to every heart beat, love is the angel's wings ready to fly. love is a hand for you to hold, love will forever be true...i suppose i'll give this a go...*covers eyes*:
Mommy, Do You Love Me?
The boy toddled into the kitchen where the mom was skimming the magazines. He tip-toed up to her chair and asked, “Mommy, do you love me?” Taken aback, the mom replied, “Yes, I do.” “Then will you come with me?” She sighed, dropping the magazines into the trash while following her small boy. After a few steps, he stopped. “Mommy, look what I’ve made for you.” He pointed to the living room wall, just behind the tattered couch. The mother saw his masterpiece and burst into tears. The boy smiled at the thought he’d made his mother pleased. He had worked on it for the past 2 days, hoping he would cheer his poor, stressed mom. “Mommy, do you love me?” Nothing came from the weeping mother. Her tears turned into a different kind of cry, it was of a harsh tone. “Why? You know we have to sell this house by Monday! You have made matters worse!” The mother screamed. She slapped the boy and shoved him into his empty room. The boy sobbed on the bare floor, unaware of what he’d done wrong. The mother dragged into the kitchen and slumped into the chair. She held her forehead and swore. After a long, solemn period, the grieved son walked up to his mother and cried, “Mommy…do you still love me?” “Why do you keep asking me, boy? If I’ve said it once, is that not enough?” The mom said angrily, “Go back to your room!” An hour later, she went out to get dinner, leaving the distressed 4-year-old in the gloomy house. The little boy heard the door slam and scurried to the window to watch the junky old car pull out from the driveway. He sat there, wondering what could possibly be done to make things better for his beloved mother. Brightening at an idea, he strolled into the pantry to get some cloth and water. He dipped the rag in the sink to the limit his height could offer. Then, he started soaking each picture that had made his mom cross. The rag became filthy. Everything the rag touched smudged. Even as a little child he knew his mother wouldn’t be happy. “I know!” The boy said to himself, “I shall run to the store and ask someone for an old, ripped cloth I could use.” He had never been out by himself, but he knew the way to the store, and he would absolutely do anything for his mother. So the boy waltzed out of the house and down the street, admiring the big world around him with each step he took. He stared at his feet; how it got faster, and then slower. Each pat of his shoes formed a beat. He grew fond of his new discovery and started running faster and faster then slowed to a stop. At the same time, his mother was on her way home with the fresh pizza and was determined to go back and hug her little one. She stopped at an intersection and caught a glimpse of a boy who looked exactly like hers. Then she smiled for the first time in the past year. When she drove the opposite direction, she stared at the boy in her rear-end mirror. She found two very wrong things: One – the little boy was in the middle of the intersection with cars. Two – that boy belonged to her…
“PETER!” She screamed, slamming the breaks. The boy looked up from his shoes and grinned at his mother. He started to run towards her car but didn’t look for the Mercedes zooming from the left.
The boy’s mom sat in the hospital, wailing. She cradled the air as she did her boy when he was a baby. The assistants at the desk traded glances and took pity on the mother. “Hey, honey. Are you alright? You wanna talk?” One of the women stated from across the room. The mom didn’t answer. She muttered, “My boy…my boy…” The doctor signaled towards the assistants. They grimaced and one nudged the other. The lady walked up to the mother and said, “Hun, come with me…I have some bad news.” “Is he okay?” The mother begged. “Your boy’s in Heaven now, Dear.” “Take me to him.”
As soon as the mom saw her boy, she ran back to the room screaming. She pounded the chairs. “Would you like to try to see him again?” The doctor asked after a while. The mother nodded. When she got into the room, she reached for her boy’s hand and kissed it. “Feel free to take whatever you want of him. If you want a lock of his hair, his clothes, or any belongings attached to him, just tell the nurses and it will be provided.” The mother reached into her son’s pockets and pulled out a quarter and a note that she had given to him in one of his lunches last year. The words on the letter were worn and illegible. The nurses came in and consoled the mother of her loss.
She stood there, staring at the headstone. All the people had gone from the funeral service, including her ex-husband. “Tara?” A voice called from behind. She swiveled around in her black dress and met a familiar face. “Mr. Mark…” “Hi. I haven’t seen you in a while. How come you never shop at the market anymore?” The old, weary man asked. “Oh, I’ve been busy. And money isn’t easy to come by these days.” “I see…I’ve stopped by to tell you something.” “Yes, Mark?” “I’m here to tell you why your boy was out that one day. You see, business was busy, so I had to skip a portion of my break time. When I was finishing up with the last customer, your youngin’, Peter, peeked up the counter until our eyes locked. He asked, ‘Mister, do you happen to have a small rag that I could use?’ I was in a hurry for what was left of my break. I asked, ‘What for, son?’ He told me that he had made a mistake with you and he wanted to fix it. But when he was cleaning up the mess with his rag at home, it got so full it started smudging the walls. I rushed out the door and yelled, ‘Boy, I haven’t got enough time. Come back in half an hour.’ I feel so bad now…you don’t know how much Peter loved ya, Tara. He would’ve died in order to make you happy.” “He did, Mark. He did.” The mom began to weep even harder. “Mark,” she continued, “I was going through the magazines to see if we could afford anything on them. Peter walked up and asked me if I loved him. I said I did. So then he brought me to the living room to show what he had made. I was so cross about what he had done and I hit him. He was only trying to cheer me up and now my Peter is gone! Then he asked me again, ‘Mommy, do you love me?’. I yelled at him to go back to his room. Oh, how I wish I could go back in time!” “He knew you loved him, Tara.”
The lonely and abandoned women entered into her silent home. She slid the couch away and fell to her knees. She cried in front of the drawing on the wall. There were butterflies and grass. There was a giraffe and an elephant. And then there were the words ‘I love you, mommy with all my heart. Be happy! Love, Peter.’ She had failed to notice the words. She looked at the old, dirty rag and pail of water lying on the ground beside her. The mother yelled, “I love you, Peter! I love you…”
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 8:52 pm
Woof Woof Woof, Woof woof. Woof woof woof....
Woof woof~
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:30 pm
This is a poem i wrote:
This is our world
The leaves flying,the wind blowing, the tears swaying from mother natures eyes, the dirt piling up like a pile of lies. The things that happen will be cruel the hardships we'll go through. Mother nature won't include us in when these bad things start to begin. So don't stop don't look down push past the hardships and the fools, if you don't you won't make it through.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:07 am
Alas, I was hoping to finish at least ONE of my short stories for this update. crying
But I think I've added an ample amount of poetry for now. sweatdrop
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:10 am
Good good. I have yet to get around to reading everyone's work lol...
But I'll have one day set aside just for that purpose soon. ^_^
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:21 am
Heheh. xd Take yer time. It's not like you're obligated to read or anything.
P.S:
You've got me perplexed with "Longing for My Loved One". >_O I think it's personification, but I can't quite figure out what the object is...
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:23 am
Object?
Depends on the interpretation I suppose...
I was thinking a woman.
You?
Lol.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:30 am
I was thinking the whole thing was personification (giving human characteristic to in-animate objects), hence my use of the word "object". sweatdrop
Well, now with the thought that the subject is a woman, I'm even more confused. ;_;
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Jafthasleftthebuilding Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:32 am
Look at it as a work of obsession.
There is a man.
He's longing for his loved one.
So much so he murders her so that she'll never leave again.
And he keeps here in his basement.
biggrin
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