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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:24 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:39 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:13 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 10:45 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:51 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 10:22 pm
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La Belle Isolde The-Mut-Cat I don't like reading stories over computer-screens X.X ... but I read the first post at least... it sounds very good... just watch out for run-on sentences... I write at 3 am... I'm not thinking clearly. But thanks, I'll remember that when I go in for draft 2 and pay extra close attention to that as well as my dialogue (screw you Mozilla, that's the correct spelling! sad ...why do you give me a red squiggly line?) and other such things mentioned i this thread.
some things that helped me when writing were to wait at least a week before editing... actually, the longer I waited, the better... that way, you can still have the detail and inspiration of your old ideas... but even after 7 days... you'll have gotten slightly smarter...
I have found some stories I wrote at age 12 when I'm in college now... and been able to remake them into current projects.
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:57 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:10 am
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I find your story disturbing yet I like it a lot. I found some small mistakes while proofreading your work. I can't wait for the rest of it!
La Belle Isolde ...the only like was from four elaborate candelabras... ....I‘m not hear to harm you... ...Since it’s creation you have committed no sins." ...I have no idea who you are.” her
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