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TheBlueWarrior
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 7:08 pm
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HI

Hey. Hows it going?  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 9:40 pm
Finally going to sleep, I just wrote this and need some reviews:

Quote:
Max is snuggled up next to Biff sleeping, the alarm clock goes off and Biff hits it. Max wiggles.

Max: I don’t want to get up…
Biff: Ugh, four in the morning…
Max: I want to cuddle some more…
Biff: Ah, well… Ivan will get us up later.
Max: Yay!

Max cuddles up with Biff, Biff puts his head on Max’s. Ivan sits up in his bed and yawns.

Ivan: I hate waking up early…

Ivan gets out of bed and goes into the bathroom. Biff gets up stretching with Max clinging on to him.

Max: No, five more minutes.
Biff: I’ve decided I didn’t want Ivan to yell this morning.
Max: Well… I’ll pout!
Biff: Hmm, how about this…

Leaving the house, Biff pops a mint into his mouth as Max acts loopy. Ivan gets a sweat drop, locking the door. He walks past Biff, annoyed.

Ivan: I hope you didn’t drug my brother…
Biff: Just some early morning oral.

Ivan stops and blinks. Biff snickers and walks past Ivan, Ivan gets a pressure point.

Ivan: You are such an a**… Max snap out of it.

At the airport, a plane lands while Biff, Ivan, and Max enter on another plane.

Max: I’ve never been on a plane!
Biff: This must be a good experience for you then.
Max: Yeah!
Ivan: Max, you hate heights though…
Max: What?
Ivan: We’re going to be up in the air, high.

Max blinks and starts to panic.

Max: GET ME OUTTA HERE!

Biff blinks, Ivan shakes his head.

Ivan: To get him really to calm him down, you give him this grape liquid stuff…

Ivan grabs Max’s shirt and hands Max the bottle.

Max: What’s this?
Ivan: Grape soda…
Max: YAY!

Max chugs the bottle, quickly he falls asleep. Biff carries Max and puts him in the chair. Ivan sighs and sits down.

Ivan: Now he’ll be quiet the whole time…
Biff: Man, I’ll have to have some of that stuff on hand all the time.
Ivan: I try not to leave it at home…

Max still sleeps, the time passes. Ivan and Biff play cards on the air plane. When they land, Max runs on all fours to check out the spectacular light show in Vegna.

Max: Wow! Vegna is beautiful!
Biff: Welcome to Vegna, the city to bright to even sleep.

Ivan grumbles carrying the luggage.

Ivan: Can you get your own stuff so we can get out of this crazy place? I hope this resort isn’t so noisy.

Biff and Max laugh and take their bags from Ivan.

Biff: Don’t worry, you’ll love it.

Ivan gets a sweat drop.
 

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Goddess Ace
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:34 am
=.=

Yay, no reviews....

Today's going to be a bad day.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:39 am
well it was random.......... sweatdrop id probably have to read the entire story to get it.... 3nodding  

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Goddess Ace
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:41 am
jfm567
well it was random.......... sweatdrop id probably have to read the entire story to get it.... 3nodding

Yeah, I just have a feeling when that part comes up it's going to be TO random.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:48 am
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jfm567
well it was random.......... sweatdrop id probably have to read the entire story to get it.... 3nodding

Yeah, I just have a feeling when that part comes up it's going to be TO random.

i thought it was pretty random and ive read SOME of the story....... just doesnt tie in........ gonk  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:54 am
... and how much have you read? Perhpas I'll give you the last section too, because I don't think you read the Christmas part yet.

Quote:
Max and Biff are setting up the table when Ivan walks in, snow covered his hair and he looked damped. Max blinks.

Max: Where’s Chris?
Ivan: Couldn’t find her…
Max: Well… did you at least leave a note at her home?
Ivan: She gave us a fake address… which I’m kind of glad because the place looked like a dump…
Max: And I thought you certainly were going to find her… well, what about calling her!
Ivan: Phone’s disconnected…

Ivan falls forward, Biff catches him. Max starts to fret.

Biff: He must be ill from the cold.
Max: What are we going to do!?
Biff: He needs to get out of these clothes.

Ivan lays asleep on his bed, he dreams of when Chris first applied for Flaming Snowball. Chris walked up to his office and knocked on the door.

Ivan: Sorry, not taking anymore applications today – come back tomorrow.
Chris: Still the same Ivan.

Ivan perks his ears up, seeing it’s Chris.

Ivan: Christen Marlous? What are you doing here?
Chris: Applying for a job but I don’t think I’ll be walking back here tomorrow.
Ivan: No-no, come in.

Chris sits down in the chair before Ivan, she hands him her application.

Ivan: I thought you left town after high school.
Chris: I just couldn’t seem to leave this place… and I see that you’ve finally made this bar after a year in the process.
Ivan: Yeah…
Chris: Flaming Snowball… heh, isn’t that what they called your brother?
Ivan: Eh, yeah… I was going to kick their asses but Max liked the name…
Chris: Where is the kid anyway?
Ivan: At our neighbor’s house… hmm, so you moved.
Chris: Umm, yeah.
Ivan: Never heard of that area… ah, and here’s your phone number.
Chris: Well, if we’re going to spend the time talking I might as well tell you that I’m an exceptional bartender.
Ivan: If we’re going to spend the night talking Chris, I might as well tell you that I’m going to buy you dinner.
Chris: Well aren’t you sweet…

Ivan wakes up from the memory and rubs his head.

Ivan: So she gave me that guy’s address but her real phone number… I guess I can look her up then.

Max pokes his head into Ivan’s room.

Max: Ivan…
Ivan: Yeah, Max?
Max: Ivan!

Max jumps on Ivan’s bed and hugs him with tears in his eyes.

Max: I was so worried!
Ivan: I’m okay Max…
Max: We’ve got Christmas dinner ready.
Ivan: Hmmm, guess I should eat.
Max: Yeah-yeah, come on!

Chris sighs and stashes her money under her mattress, she hooks her phone back in.

Chris: I don’t want him to find me like this… I might as well suck it up… and leave a voice mail.

Chris dials the number on her phone, she sighs and then grins.

Chris: Hi Ivan, tell Max I said Merry Christmas! Eh, sorry about this morning, my hangover got the best of me. Anyway, my friend from Saint Barbra is here and she’s taking back to her home for the holidays. See ya back in work when I come back, bye.

Chris hangs up the phone and lies back on the bed.

Chris: I wish I had a friend from Saint Barbra… no, I’m really just a prostitute trying to pay my rent and get out of debt…

Ivan plays the voice mail and sighs, Max wags his tail.

Max: So she’s okay?
Ivan: Yeah, she’s okay.
Biff: Well now, if Chris is going to take a vacation I say we might as well kick it back during the holidays.
Ivan: Hmm?
Max: Yay!
Ivan: What are you talking about?
Biff: A week in paradise, the hottest resort in Vegna.
Ivan: Impossible, the place has to be booked out.
Biff: Not for a VIP like myself, you up for it?

Max wags his tail and grins, Ivan sighs.

Ivan: Yeah, I’m game.
Max: YAHOO!
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:57 am
word, im still wondering if they gave him "grape soda" or chloroform...... O_o;  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:02 am
rofl

Actually, it was Dimetap - my mother gave it to me when I was young...  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:06 am
Goddess Ace
rofl

Actually, it was Dimetap - my mother gave it to me when I was young...

im guessing for colds? domokun  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:25 am
sleeping  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:32 am
Waking Ned Divine! and he naked.  

Sakura-Kyoukan


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:33 am
Sakura-Kyoukan
Waking Ned Divine! and he naked.

p***s?  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:38 am
Goddess Ace
Sakura-Kyoukan
Waking Ned Divine! and he naked.

p***s?

O_o....... im lost.........  

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Sakura-Kyoukan

PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:40 am
jfm567
Goddess Ace
Sakura-Kyoukan
Waking Ned Divine! and he naked.

p***s?

O_o....... im lost.........
p***s(es)  
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