Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Arcanas]

I say add a beard...beards make one look badass  

[Erverain]

Perhaps a different backing?
Tried that, the beard doesn't show well...
 

[Arcanas]

oh well...

Umm...a more badass sword? ^___^  

[Erverain]

Hmmm, a more imposing set of armor might be needed here... White Rook, maybe.
And this is the only sword I have that can be sheathed...
 

[Sentama Lin]

This is tough... Ervie... I'd like more red on the bottom part of your avatar.

*arkie's avi reminds me of Pally Cecil*  

[Kire Kaysan]

It is a good cat/bear monk look. It is a good combination of items.  

[Erverain]

Gracious me, it's Kire! Long time no see. But I don't suppose you could look less like me?
 

[PendragonX9]

i don't think the pants are black enough they stand out to much  

[Kusaragi]

You look strangely like someone else on this page. stare I't's a good setup but you look WAY too much like Arc.  

[Erverain]

Yeah, the face on your hand is pretty creepy there, Kusa. Otherwise, you'd look like a crazy steampunk-type inventor.
 

[Sentama Lin]

Erve, good looking as always, though I do agree with the pants comment from Pen. They do stand out a bit too much.  

[invisible-weirdo]

(Randominmity: Y'know I never really thought of Erv's pants as 'standing out' before but after Pendragon's and Lin's comments on it...I realize that it does stand out >.>)

Anyway, moving on. I actually really like this one Lin. One of my favorites of yours...If that sequence of words made any sense at all sweatdrop  

[Erverain]

Well, like pinstripes, it directs the eyes down. Away from the rest of me.
And the positioning is fine, but you could probably try sprucing up with a few thematically appropriate items...  

[Kusaragi]

I don't really have anything more to say about YOURS Erverain. But Invisible could use a better HAT. ^_^

Ok so now I tried to make something FOR the creepy face on hand weapon. mrgreen (It's glitching too so I'm using three but I only OWN two. ^_^ )  

[PendragonX9]

it's all very dark but then the superior form and the head spikes stand out to much