Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Mugen Nagrom]

"Oh look mommy, its the spikey man with the funny pants!"
"Stay away from him, you'll lose an eye."  

[PendragonX9]

idk it kinda looks like you just took every thing that looked japanese and just through it all together  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

I'm not certain that I like your eyepatch...  

[Mugen Nagrom]

PendragonX9

idk it kinda looks like you just took every thing that looked japanese and just through it all together

Apparently you do not know what a tengu is
oh and ^ whats with the duck feet?  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

uhhhh... i dunno...

and what's with your cloud? I remember Tengu as the final boss from 'dead or alive 2" and he didn't have a cloud  

[invisible-weirdo]

stare Um...That's not quite what he means by Tengu...
Clicky and learn: http://www.pantheon.org/articles/t/ten-gu.html
(EDIT: actually that article is quite small...Just type in "Tengu" on Google or something and you'll get a better idea of it...And the cloud thing.)

But anyway, as for your avatar...I think it's something about the hair or the goggles or both that's bothering me >.< Either way, it's not one of your best ones...

(I don't know why I still post in here... gonk I haven't changed my avatar in...quite a while...)  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

Did you like it better with the normal "mysterious stranger look?"
got given these as a gift in a gift-giving thread... thought I might as well wear them...

just saw tengu description..they eat children?? eek

and with ur avi, the lower flame is blocking ur pants  

[Mugen Nagrom]

Hamlet XIII

just saw tengu description..they eat children?? eek

Among other things, they also are known for picking up travelers and leaving them on top of trees.

Your avi keeps looking more and more off...needs some sort of theme or something funny...  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

I'll keep it... easier job of criticizing it

maybe u should take some thing off ur's.... looks a bit cluttered near the top  

[Kusaragi]

I think you could use a better hat, the one you have looks good, but I think there may be one that fits better. You know? ^_^

 

[Elcia]

I like it, though it does take some liberties with the rules of good use of color combos. At the same time gaia is mostly to blame for that. Just the same, its a pretty awesome, if odd, use of the little item glitch that is giving me more than one of my evolving items as well. ^_-

(I'll do my best to take the "Magic elf princess" look to new heights. I've been told it looks sweet. XD )  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

maybe if it were possible you could get your shoes to show  

[PendragonX9]

it quite top heavy you might want to trim it a bit  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

I need to critique you right...

You're too perfect! make something wrong about urself so others can critique you! razz  

[Erverain]

*cracks knuckles*
Okay, here we go.
Firstly, the hat needs to go. It's too big. Secondly, the eyes are silly looking. Also, the thing floating above your off-hand looks a bit out of place. The shirt could also be replaced, but I suppose your personal preference keeps it there.