Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Magical Maiden]

gonk
Wearing set, but its understandable.  

[Erverain]

Not a set, per se. There are actually three sets within this little grouping.
But yours could do without the smoke, maybe. I don't see anything wrong with it, I just need to nitpick something.  

[invisible-weirdo]

Ooh you look all shnazzy Erv...
I can't really find anything to critique here... gonk

(And holy crap. I actually changed up my avatar~ Critique away, folks ^.^)  

[Arcanas]

whoa...it's not so busy...

I'd do away with the mask though, just me  

[Black Cat Hamlet]

there's a bit too much on ur avi, I think...  

[invisible-weirdo]

I've got issues against that particular starter set... stare But it's better. Everything seems to be going together a little better but I think it could still use a tweak or two...

And by the way Arc, which mask are you referring to? Just out of curiosity, that's all...  

[Kusaragi]

I don't think you should get rid of either of the masks... in fact I think you should look at how the HIPster Red glasses interact with what you have and maybe move the imp to the other hand (it blocks your face).

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[invisible-weirdo]

I checked that out. But the red ones make my eyes look all bug-like >.< And this is the only hand I can hold it with.

Now as for you. I like it, but the black items seem to be concentrated in one spot, making it hard to see some of them (I'm mostly referring to the winged anklets and the death whisper on your hand(though I eventually notice since I start feeling like something's staring at me >.<)). I like the color scheme overall though...  

[Kusaragi]

That's too bad about the glasses tip, I'm using that combo now and I'm not sure why it wouldn't work for your avatar. *Shrug* I'm still testing my theory about the Stack-able, Evolve-o-items so I'm going to keep it for one more week and see if I can get a few more piled up on this and save it. ^_^

I'm almost SURE something added to your facial area would set off your avatar nicely, but if you can't find anything it looks fairly good as is right now. ^_^

Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.

 

[Saverio C.]

The change in style from the out side to the inside (drawing style) makes it look strange. Prehaps something more heavy there instead of the light cloth  

[Erverain]

Sorry, Sav, but the props and the cape have to go.  

[PendragonX9]

the fire sword stands out much to much i think you'd be better off with just the katana  

[Phaeton]

just change the boots. Those are too strangely mishapen.  

[Erverain]

Yay, underboob!
Seriously, I'm not actually used to seeing your avi's face...  

[Trish the Stalker]

Speaking of face, there's something weird about yours.